Reviews for Eternal Love Part One: The Beginning

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Koragirl 2008-08-19 ch 10,	abuseplease please pleas4e please please finish your story i make you a deal if you finish your story on the eternal love saga i buy your books and i will tell other that your stories are great and i will read those book that you made i will buy the off of but i want to know who much i will still buy them from you but you must finish the 4 story of eternal love then i buy the first book then you finish the saga set i buy the all of you book from you i love this story and as reader i would like you to finish it please but i is up to you. please get back to me this week because if you do make this deal with me i buy the first book in last sept 2008
OkamiiRin 2008-04-22 ch 46,	abuseI know it has been long since you posted this story, but I must tell you, it is perhaps one of the best Atem stories I have ever read. None before it have given me such cause for tears. And let me tell you, I cried hard through this last chapter. I am glad to see it has sequals, and trust me, I'll be reading them. Amazing story, and major kudos to you for bringing out tears from me. It is not an easy task. I don't think I've cried this hard, since the series ended and I had to watch Atem walk through those doors, and watch Yugi cry. Good job, and I'm looking forward to continuing on into the sequals. You'll be hearing from me again.
Koragirl 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseplease finish your 4 story on lady arora i like it a lot !
Bleeding Blue Kunoichi 2007-04-24 ch 46,	abuseI absolutly love it, I am looking forward to reading the other parts. For your first fanfic that was very eloquently written. To be honest i was slightly about reading this story being that generally first ones are generally not so great. Yours by far is in the top five Fanfic stories i have ever read. That is a great acomplishment , for i have read over 200. I was listening to a song by within temptation and it fit these lat few chapters perfectly, "bittersweet". Please continue writing, i would highly consider doing that as a profession. I do apoligize if this is to long but i figured i owed it to you since i just read this story from start to end of part 1 and didnt review each ch. Well I hope u keep getting hit with the inspiration stick, so much that that is all you may do. With love, Bleeding Blue Kunoichi P.S. You were right i cried my eyes out, great job. ^_^
Moxy 2006-01-13 ch 46, anon.	abuseHey there I loved the story all 46 chapters. Your are a great auther and I am looking forward to reading Eternal love part two. Again congrats on a wonderful story.
Michiko-sama 2005-07-10 ch 46,	abuseLady of Perfection: sobs hysterically what a wonderful story, wa...how great...i love this! it captures the soul better than any story i have ever read...omigod, how old are you? please email me, i'm a loyal fan-aargh! oops, my yami, and my writing counterpart... Yami Nefera: hi, i'm lady of perfection's writing twin! we're actually best friends, you know, almost like sisters. i'm too lazy to write another review, so I attached mine to her's. anyway, i love your story too, but i have a few things to point out. your spelling isn't the best in some places, and lady aurora phoenix is sometimes a borderline mary-sue. atemu you have developed in a good way, but i didn't see enough of him before he fell for aurora. aurora you developed well too, but i'd like to see more of her personality. this is not a flame! i'm merely commenting. oh boy... Lady of Perfection: i'm back! mean old yami, always a criric. i love your story anyway! Both: look for our review in the second part! see ya!
Pastelblue.rin 2005-07-07 ch 42,	abusecrying My Ra, this chapter is so sad!!
Pastelblue.rin 2005-07-07 ch 41,	abuseAw wipes away a tear darn Anubis!
Pastelblue.rin 2005-07-07 ch 40,	abuseO Anubis vs. Atem!!
A1tissimo 2005-07-07 ch 46,	abusesobs Why's it have to be so sad? Well, it was an awesome story, and I'm gonna go read the sequel. :D
DDCfreak 2005-05-15 ch 46,	abuseI only read it quickly. That is my usual method of reading - to read very quickly, skim and skip, and then go back later to read for details. You may have never wondered about why that is. One of the reasons is precisely for passages like this. Emotions that this type of passages evoke are very hard for me to deal with, and reading it fast helps me to get ready to deal with it. I hate to cry and reading that way helps me stay in control. Please send me a full copy. When I sit down to read it in detail, I want to be able to curl up on the couch in comfort.
Atemu Fangurl 2005-05-15 ch 46,	abusefinishes crying her eyes out then clicks the submit review button As sad as this chapter was, it was beautifully written. You did a great job, Lady Phoenix! I look forward to the second part of the Eternal Love series!! Be back to review when the new series is up! Bye for now! lol
Atemu Fangurl 2005-05-15 ch 45,	abuseOMG..the next chapter is gonna be such a tear jerker..wipes away a tear You are an awesome writer, Lady Phoenix! I can't wait for the second series..I just know it is gonna be great! LOL!!
DDCfreak 2005-05-14 ch 44,	abuseI like the way the story is moving along. I think your idea of breaking it up is a good one. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out. ^_^
DDCfreak 2005-05-08 ch 42,	abuseYay! You were true to your word; Lady Phoenix is back. Now for the boy ...

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