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Warrior of winds 2006-12-20 ch 4,	abuseWow, never thought about Plasmius like this before, rather deep.
Crazy Girl Person 2005-12-24 ch 14,	abuseThat was a damn good story. I really love how you managed to take a secondary character and make such a fleshed out and well written story about him. You gave great life and history to each character, even your own. That is very impressive. As for the ending, though it was depressing it was appropriate. There are not always happy endings. Keep up the great work!
Skyla Moon 2005-09-09 ch 2,	abuseYou're description, as always, is fantastic. I really like the storyline as well. Haha I know you wrote this a while ago, but it's intriguing. I shall get to the rest of it sometime soon. Grin. Ah, and that last bit about the mud... silly guy. I suppose I do the same thing, though... well, at least a little.
Rebel-Aquarius 2005-08-23 ch 14,	abuseOh dear god. How depressing...but, that's Slade for you...and Otto should have known better... Dear me...well, excellent ending. --Rebel
Aznka 2005-08-22 ch 14,	abuseVery nice ending. It's nice how Slade always wins, right? You of all people would understand just how Slade had to have revenge and how important Wintergreen is. I mean without our favorite manservant (butler sounds too cliche) Slade would have been Evil Goop Thing #2. The very idea of Slade taking the magnatized cuffs and formula and using it against his enemy was appalling, but so cool! If you just leave it here, that's fine with me. A sequel would most likely have Otto breaking out and killing Slade, no? So, don't do it. As usual, you portrayed each and every character perfectly. Slade was his ol' badass self and you even gave Wintergreen a part! No one really writes about Plasmus and I'm glad you decided to take up a challenge. Always Watching, Aznka
Infamous One 2005-08-19 ch 13,	abuseHeh,I meant to put this in my last review by the way...I saw your artwork and it's really nice.Just so you know your artistic talents are appreciated as well as your writing talents.
Infamous One 2005-08-19 ch 14,	abuseWhoohoo!Slade is so creepy cool,and just damn scary.The end was totally tragic and yet fitting...poor Otto,should have just gone for the clean kill. And Wintergreen is a total ** kicker,I love how putting extra sweetner in Slade's tea is a form of revenge.And the fact that he tackles Robin at one point,what a tough old dude. Alas,it has come to an end as always a bitter sweet feeling until the next fiction arrives.Bravo my dear,wonderful as always.
Blue Autumn Sky 2005-08-19 ch 14,	abuseOh my god! That's it! That can't be it! Poor Otto. Just when we thought he was straightning up, Slade comes and now he's back to square one. Are you gonna make a sequel? I hope you make a sequel. Otto can't just go out like that. Bring on the sequel.
Akamai 2005-08-19 ch 14,	abuseYay! Two chapters! And it looks like everything's back to square one! For Otto at least. Oh well. This was a nice story!
Valda 2005-08-19 ch 14,	abusewhat n EVIL bastard O.O sequal? ^^ amazin chapters, i cnt beleive its ova :( luvz ya Valda X p.s, it's anwen, buh i hav n nu name now :)
Alexnandru Van Gordon 2005-08-19 ch 14,	abuse...Bastard...Whoa, O.O did I just say that out loud? Sorry, excuse the language...ahem... What a way to end a story. Well, you shocked me the last chapter and I must say you really tyook me by surprise this time. The End? YOu're sure...that so terrible--not in the writing, just the fact tha poor olf Otto is back to the beginning, everything just...all, to put it bluntly, for nothing, unless you consider Slade having a new magnet toy...Damn him. That was truly just like his character. I can see him doing that I know it fit in so well with the story but now I want to go and kill him...damn...ARGH! Poor Otto needs revenge...Well, godd chapter. I hope to see another update from you again soon in teh Villain Convention story. Hehe--see ya around. -Standing ovation with thundrous applause echoing... -Alexnandr Van Gordon
Alexnandru Van Gordon 2005-08-19 ch 13,	abuseWow...talk about a twist. Here I was thinking that it would be perfectly dreadful if Robin was the one who had to free Slade, and then you also shocked me by getting Otto infected instead. I wonder how that's going to end up, not to mention Slade jacked a new captive invention. Magnets...that was really ingenius. I never really considered that before...but don't think I forgot about you taking forever to update. I was starting to worry that you died or something...sheesh, don't give a guy a heart attack. Anyway, keep up the goodwork and get working on the villain convention one again. I was laughing so hard at the last chapter that I had trouble breathing. Ha! See ya around. -Standing ovation -Alexnandru Van Gordon
Skyla Moon 2005-08-15 ch 1,	abuseOh, very spiffy indeed. When it's not two in the morning and when I have time, I shall most certainly read the rest. Nod.
keemew2 2005-08-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't normally read TT fics, though I have run through a few summeries here adn there just to see what peeps have done so far. But after seeing a rerun of The End part one, and saw as Plasmus was in human form again I just had ot go online and look to see if anyuone has done any fics with him in it. I can't believe I ahd to go to the search engine, though, they don't even have his name in the character bar! That is so unfair! Anyway, I so love what you did. It's beautifully heartwrenching! I wonder how Plasmus came ot be in the first place, though. I personallky have never read the comics, so if he is in there I wouldnt' know. ANyway, you di dan excellant job on this, I will have to read more, when I can. It is on my to read lits, however, and I ~will~ get to it. Beautiful, just...beautiful.
Alexnandru Van Gordon 2005-07-25 ch 12,	abuseI know what the real Slade looks like and I'm really glad you kept his metahuman powers in check. After all, coming back from the dead did leave a lot of people hanging (though I really don't like the reason they gave fro Slade's coming-back in "The End" shows). Anyhow--loved the action and description, and I can't wait for an update. I've been gone to PEI so that's why I wasn't here to review your last chapter--but I made sure to go back and read it! Anyhow--I eagerly await an update. -Standing ovation -Alexnandru Van Gordon

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