Aww the ending is rather depressing but I can be relieved by the fact that this is not the actual ending and that even if it was, a happier ending would follow this.

Gah, irony is one sick son of a bitch sometimes >.< What a romantic ending *sigh* Why did it have to end in a shower of green sparks though!? T_T

a late review but still i likis very much! I hate to admit it but it kinda touched me ~__~ poor Shizuru...

Nicely done. The lingerie shop scene was cute.

no the story plot makes complete sense. good how you kept true with the character emotions/feelings.

That was very good! I hope that you will write more HiME fics!

I liked this story, very sad, but very good at the same time. As far as I know there wern't any grammar mistakes. Hope you write some more Mai-HiME stories.

~Painestwin

P.S. Where did you read the translated version of the radio drama?

aw... i liked it...

how about a second chapter?!

Sob... I'm moved to tear.
I really like your fanfic.

And who might you be, hm? Putting my Negima story on your alert list and then not reviewing my story. ^_^

Anyway, reviewing this b/c I don't watch Naruto or anything.

I like it. ^_^ It's a retelling of their meeting and what they go through, and rather sweet. I liked the moment at the end a lot, when Shizuru forgets what she wants to say - very bittersweet, that. The thoughts are kinda stilted, like they don't flow very smoothly - is English your first language? - but otherwise it's a very nice story. ^_^

aww,
it's touching! ;_;
i really enjoy this story.

; _ ; S...Shizuru-san... Natsuki... Gahn~! :sobb: I'm glad you wrote a Natsuki/Shizuru fic. They are such a beautiful pairing, well in fics. Kawaii sou ne, Shizuru dara... (What a pity, Shizuru is/ Poor Shizuru) It does have grammar errors but it still touched my heart. I really like how you developed this story and how each scene moved from one point to the next. It went well with the drama radio. I really thought the ending bitter sweet and sad. Maiido okiini!! (Kyoto dialect: Thank you! instead of standard Japanese 'Arigatou'.)

Ah, Shizuru/Natsuki, the only storyline worth following. Nice little story, but there were several grammar and spelling errors, and I think the tense shifted rather oddly. But I enjoyed reading it just the same.