oh come on! I really wanna kno wuts gonna happen! Did they hit like a bad luck streak or sumthin?? PLease pLEASE PLEASE update soon! Its be a long while!

get more, interesting start.

All I can say is I wholeheartedly agree with the last five review(ers)! Good, very dark story, please update!

very sad..but please continue the story!

great start on the story! update soon please.

good story you need to write some more!

good story you need to write some more!

What you've posted so far is quite intruiging. I can't wait for more.
michi

This has to be one of my favorite stories right now, please continue!

I think that u should flashback to what happened to the scoobies and then maybe after that u can start to show flashbacks of everything else that you want. Just a suggestion though. I do hope u update soon

this sounds like it wil be an awesome story.

Well, I for one would like to know what happened to the scoobs. Maybe a general overview of how things got so messed up, without going into much detail; that you can do later. I'm really enjoying this story, it's different and original. Plus, it's willow/faith. I hope your computer cooperates, I understand how you feel, I for one hate writing with computers in general, but atleast mine I can stand. I'll hold my breath for your update!

small but good, write more soon.