This is my favorite scene ever!

XD

I haven't played this game since I was a kid (maybe 7 or 8) and it was on the computer version too!

CloudxAerith forever!

This is amazing work! Be proud!

When I saw Cloud twirl off, I was like 'WTH?' Who twirls like that, honestly?!

But I did like it when Cloud kissed Aerith's hand. Or Aeris's. (Different names but the same person)

I believe that he did love her so I'm happy! Great work again!

Cloud with Barret? (O_o)

Awkward...

Again, great work! I can't want for Advent Children Complete to come to the US. COME ON!

I love you Emerald Princess. Final Fantasy 7 was and still is my favorite Final Fantasy. My computer broke and now that i got a new one, i've come to find that you've finished the second installment, and i must say, that i love it! Can't wait for the 3rd one.

*sniffle* This part in the game always has me tearing up in the end...And even if it didn't, it would still make me sad somehow... :(

(Comes out of the temporary sadness)Anyways, this was a very good chapter depicting how Cloud and the others felt when Aeris died. Great battle scene. Hope they get their revenge soon!

Loved the song, by the way. When I get the chance, I'll review the third installment.

Absolutely BRILLIANT description of the approach to the Crater! I emailed you a link that should have the FMVs you need; Can't wait for the remainder of this installment! See you next time!

The end of disc 1 is so sad...and you did it extreme justice! Very very well written; I nearly teared up at the end.

Yay!! You're back in writing!! Excellent!! Hope you can finish this novelisation by end of this year? Looking forward to it...:)

As much as I love this game (and, consequently, this story), the events from the end of the Temple to the end of the first disc have always made me really really sad. It says a lot about your writing ability that you were able to bring out the same emotions I have when these events happen in the game. The next few chapters will be pretty interesting. See you later!

Woot! A few new updates and well written out like always. Keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to reading your novelisation of Advent Children.

Wa. . . .You never write already ar?

*my eyes hurt*
done reading but there is no more...

so how is the next cheapter going, keep it up and dont give up this story is great.

*mybe i should buy the game*

this novel is great, i have never played the game so i trust the story is accurat to the game.
i have only read to 21 by now.
i have seen Last order and advent children but in the story Cloud told about the events 5 years ago dosent match Last order, somthing is strange about the way cloud and the others remembers it, i quess i just have to read on

keep up the good work

w00t, boss battles coming up. Not much else to say, your writing remains as good as it's been throughout the story. I'm glad to hear that you're not going to drop the story, as that'd be a shame. See you next update!

Madam, you are amazing!! Your doing a absolutly smashing job at this bloomin story! (haha ya I'm not English, but I thought that I would just try it on, you know:P ) Anyways, all kidding aside, you really are doing a great job, and plaese don't stop writing! Yes I klnow thats really selfish of me, since you have a life and a job and a car and all those nice things to deture you, but I'm perfectly fine with being a rotten selfish guy. Your instalments are also a great help to me since I am tyring to write my own Fan Fic, and these things are exellent resorces since I havent played the game for some time now, and is buryed somewhere in my room under god-knows-what. Best of luck with the rest of your instalments!

Cheers

yay! I love it! I hope you update soon!

Very very well written, as I've come to expect from you. Very cool to see all this stuff from Cloud's PoV as opposed to the third-person PoV in the game. I look forward to the conclusion of the Temple, but I understand that you have a life in addition to writing. Take as long a break as you need.