This story hasn't been updated since 2005. I'm guessing it's too much to hope for an update. Perhaps I can resurrect it? It's an original plotline, though there is a lot of OOCness. The author seems to have abandoned his account anyway.

wow great story it was preety sad the last chapter kataras exile it was so good that i almost burst into tears thank godness that hopefully that won't happen on the brande new episodes of avatar .

this...story..is...so...SAD!

Hey man wheres chapter 8 been waiting 1 month

this is the best avatar story i've read and i hope you make another one soon!

woah... that was good. im waiting for the rest...

hey i reall ylike your story but is that posible, i mean to just go in to a random city and sudunly (sp?) your a slave i mean don't there rule not apli (sp?) to out siders. but hell its your story i was just thinking of it. i have a question is the town like not populated and in ruens and stuff or are there like alot of men? oh and i had an idea! ok so katar is wearing like nary nothing right, not to get on the perverted side of things but the king coughd use her as like his ** and make Aand like so man that he goes in top the avatar sate and then zuko could see the light know it was the avatar and go running to it and then save katar with out knowing it. like you know give them time to escap or something. yah i do i lot of thinking and i love to write thing. but i want to start a story on here i just need the insperation oh yes and sorry about stuch a long message^_^'

c u l8ter

Please make another chapter very soonly! (makes puppy eyes).

Finoly an Aang/Katara story!
make another chapter!
make another chapter!
make another chapter!
P_L_E_A_S_E?

OMG! I cant' wait to see what will happen! Please, please update soon! I must see what happens next! - Nya!

-Sammi/AlexisYuki141

Wow, omg, wow. Yes, that is all I can say, but wow. Awesome!

HUH!NO!!
MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER VERY VERY VERY VERY (15 minutes later) VERY VERY SOON! OR YOU SHALL DIE IN A HORRIBLE DEATH BYE THE ALMIGHTY PERSON OF ALL PERSONS!

i hope you know how dissapointed we all are that you don´t want to continue! I´ll tell you that we all gonna keep writing stuff like this till you update. we all are so sade. come on! Even my friend who doesn´t likes this story loves it! There are 15 out of 27 teens who love avatar and 20 out of 27 who love your fanfic come on continue!
Katie

you know that avatar just in germany. Well, since it began ilooked for like months for a fav. i´m heartbrocken that you don´t want to continu it. Man i loved this story and when it gets interesting you just wanna stop. that's so not fair! You don´t know how long it took till i found a good story! I´m translating for a friend of mine who loves avatar but doesn´t understand any english. hope u r ok with it! Don´t let us down. Come on wright! there'are so many fans who want that you continue.
Hope you´ll wright soon
Katharina

why did you quit writing this? it is just to good! if so, do you know who may have continued your story? if not, could you PLEASE continue it?

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and please title it fanfiction