WOW.

You. Are. Amazing.

Great job on this one! :D

VERY good! You had me going there... XD Nice change of perspective in Zolo for once.

wow, that's really... deep. i can't even to begin to understand the complexity, but im getting their. Wow, this is really amazing

This is good.

Hehehehe... I like this story. Zoro seems like the type who buries things in his mind. I also like how he describes Nami in his dream. Good job! _

I want to like this, but I feel it's at cross purposes. I think you should keep the mutual pain and sympathy in reality, and let Zoro have his kinky little fantasy angst-free. As is, I think Zoro needs a psychiatrist (maybe that's what you were going for? XD)

Haha this was great! Zoro was dreaming! *thumbs up* good job on the fic.

Ramon: will this fic continue?

Sunny: and by the way, we loved that One piece music video you made about these two, really awesome.