I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more

chapters?

That was the sweetest story I've ever read! It even kinda reminds me of my life in a way...U r so $%&* talented!I LUV THIS STORY! I just had to leave a review for it. One (very) slight complain, at the end it keeps sayin Toran...instead of Trunks. That's all. Please keep writing. u really have a knack for it. GREAT JOB!

It was very good. I was actually wondering about the ending. I think she forgave him just a bit to quickly, but I guess that okay. It was very well written with some minor grammatical errors. But overall a very nice story.

Bravo! Bravo! Very deep. This is a terrific story and you are a brilliant writer.

It's different than what a lot of ff.net has and I like it.

Yup.

that's so sweet!

anyone else reading this, Marian's writing has the power to makee even ME cry

Opal

Wonderful! Very sweet! Keep writing, I loved this!

oh my god, that was THE best fic I've ever read, hands down! It beats "The Real Deal," even, with such wonderful diction! that was terribly poignant, i must say! please continue writing :)

you are so talented! i love this!

..oh...that was beautiful..! I really hope you decide on doing a continuation.

Awwweeell! That was so kewl! Plan on making a sequal?

Wow. Just, wow. This is amazing. It's got an *excellent* plot and I really like the way you conveyed both of their emotions. There were times when the time frame was a little unclear, but it's very well written notheless. I was wondering if I could host this. Email me: Website: http:/www.envy.nu/smabbi

Ja! *Smabbi-chan*

There is only one word to discribe this story. Amazing! Simply amazing. Your stories are wonderful Marian. No matter how many times I read them, I am still caught up in them, over and over again. Once again I say thank you for writing such wonderful stories.

Beautiful! The points of view are awesome! Very well written

I love the way your words are phrased it makes the story deeper.