 Evil Mina 2005-06-25 . chapter 1Hi...I hope you don't mind me reviewing this months too late (I have a bad habit of digging up old fics that I randomly find). But anyways, this is really good! Normally, I'm not a big fan of drabbles, particularly drabbles that focus on description over action, and that could work just as well if you substituted one character name for another (being the hardcore canon nerd that I am), but you pulled this off really nicely. Congratulations on overcoming my prejudices ;).
Every little detail is stated so well, from the light streaming in from the window to Reno's grogginess as he wakes up, and yet in spite of all the description, it doesn't seem overwritten; the writing style really fits the story, and adds to the whole tender romantic feel...and that made no sense whatsoever, did it. Anyways, I thought that the interaction between Reno and Yuffie was very sweet and believable. Now I'm jealous of how well you can pull off romance scenes without making them awkward :). Very, very well done. You should write more stories!
On a side note, I'm a bit surprised that this hasn't gotten more reviews. Maybe just because of the subject matter. Strange. |