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littletwich
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
Too bad that you r 2 lazy to continue this fic, I liked both chapters. Hope that you will update quicker that one chapter per 2 years.
xxguesswhoxx
2008-08-09 . chapter 2
i like it plz update soon!
Ash of Mine
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
Love the idea of Sasuke and Naruto as teachers!!
And love the interactions between the characters ^o^
keikeiaznqueen
2008-01-10 . chapter 2
Ohh, please update this. It's pwning, it's pwning! KonoIna is god, didn't think it would be but woah, I'm loving it! And I love the two genin teams here. =D They're very lovable indeed, and Sasuke and Naruto as their teachers.
Luminous Corruption
2007-12-17 . chapter 2
i'm not quite sure whether to cry or squeal. Squeal for the last bit,m cry for poor Naruto and Sasuke...
MayIFall
2007-11-24 . chapter 2
o...this is a really entertaining fic
lol.
i enjoy reading it lots!!
hope update soon ^^
.capricces.
2007-08-20 . chapter 2
Very entertaining. I'm glad that you got into Naruto again, and decided to update this fic. I hope you'll update again soon!

I love the characterizations and the teacher/student interactions. Heh I never considered KonohamaruxInari, they make a cute couple! Their relationship kind of reminds me of Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, except it's a ninja/civilian pairing.
Ali
2007-08-01 . chapter 2
This was fantastic! I mean just really really great. THIS is how a fanfic Should be written, it was beautifully worded and the plot—so far at least, is simply amazing. The characters are absolutely perfect, Their lines are hilarious and perfect for them, and not to mention, I LOVE THE PAIRINGS. SasuNaru is my alltie favorite pair. There are far too few lovely fanfics such as this, and you’ve no idea how glad I am to have found this one. It’s beautiful. Now, I’ve noticed you haven’t updated in quite some time, And I know its hard to keep a fic going, and sometimes something happens or you can’t get around to it, Or you have writer block, or whatever, but please do try! I would really just love to read an ending to this, one after many chapters—preferably. I’m saving your profile to my favorites, so please update.
phailure bites
2007-06-24 . chapter 2
Cool but it lacked something. I don't know what though.
LoOkYiTsSpAm
2007-05-19 . chapter 2
LoL! i'm so happy that you've updated, i totally forgot about this fic, until i checked my favorites list. and lo and behold. :D I can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully i won't have to wait 2 years again! :]
Emerald Gaze
2007-05-16 . chapter 2
wa! T_T it ended again!...it was good to!T_T!great job ! write mo plz!^_^!
Azamiko
2007-05-15 . chapter 2
Okay, I couldn't figure out what was going on until I went back and reread the first chapter, but then I remembered how interesting this story was...I find it especially interesting that Inari seems to be an exorcist of some kind...how did that happen? ;b I hope your next update is quicker than the last!
DazeWolf
2007-05-15 . chapter 2
Oh! There's another thing I love about your writing! Naruto is SO dopey. SO MUCH. And I love it. C: I loathe when people...oh...in their summary it's all "Naruto is smarter than people think...and an emo goddess of destruction" I mean - he IS smarter 'than people think', but in a cute...DOPEY sort of way. Not a "I can spurt Calculus equations while simultaneously writing the path of bipedal evolution backwards and upside down" kind of way, you know? Of course you do. C:

Oh, if you're wondering, it was Naruto's comment about libido that made me think of that.

Also (this is what I meant to say before I 'oh!'d) the beginning of this chapter reminds me a whole lot of something that I can't recall for the life of me, so if it was inspired by anything, could ya do me a favor and pass me a hint?

Ahah, you made just about everyone gay, didn't you? That's just lovely. (: It really seems like something...-not to try and compare me with someone I don't even know but - it sort of reminds me how I find it so incredibly difficult to come up with heterosexual pairings when I'm drawing, but homosexual pairings are super easy.

"Tazuna, who had entered right at that moment, turned around and walked back out. Moments later, they could hear the older man guffaw loudly in the next room."

I can picture it, too. It made me grin. C:

Konohamaru and Inari...they'd be so cool hanging out if it actually happened in the manga/anime. I'd like to see some really awesome person draw art to go with your story, because how I picture them together is so lovely I wish I could see it in some sort of physical form, aha. I think you've captured their more mature (ahaha, yea...) personalities wonderfully. Awesome job there.

Whoa...I thought Naruto and Sasuke were already hooked up in the first chapter! This caught me by surprise - aha. C: I guess this just means you do a remarkable job of...foreshadowing their eventual lovey-dovey-cuteness. C:

I love the secret door in the prison cell. LOVE it.

Inari and Konohamaru are so cute. (My spell-check is flipping out against all these names) Awesome second chapter. Once again, I'm so happy you're back! C:
DazeWolf
2007-05-15 . chapter 1
Ah, I love this story. When my own love of Naruto was dwindling, this story is what ignited the flame of my love back to full burst. C: Now I was on a down-ward trail again and I feel your writing is going to boost me up once more.

I absolutely adore your writing style. How you're always referencing back to little quirky things already stated (how cool!), and it's got that tone that's almost...it's like one of those children's books that you read and say "Whoa, this is written like a...NOT children's book. I love it"

I just re-read the first chapter, now I'm on to the second. I'm really glad you're back.
Teioke Sheay
2007-05-15 . chapter 2
OMG! Me luv! This is so AWESOME! I need a new word... spectacular... yeah! SPECTACULAR! Fontastic! Update as soon as you can! I don't know why I didn't review this fic early but I'm sure I had a reason... anyway, I wanna see what happens next!

~TS~ later...
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