Lovely, simply lovely. The way you wrote it was enchanting and you made a seemingly simple and cliched concept different and just captivation. I love the quote at the very beginning of the fic, it's just relates to the fic so well and it sort of sets the mood. It's fics like this that just feeds my love for the Nami x Zoro pairing. Great job.

Wow...this is just as good as the other one...

that's absoulutly gorgeous. i really cant think of anything else to say

Nice companion. A necesary match, although it seems better suited before the previous one than after.

You're very good at portraying a story/emotion in this short form. Really nice work. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

That's it, you're going on my Author Alert list NOW.

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Excelent, I love how you wrote this. It's a very interesrting side of Nami

wow, that was short but the words you used said what needed to be said. you picked the perfect POV.

Oh, beautiful, really beautiful... and very well written :D

MARTA

I wasn't sure what I expected you to do when I suggested you did Nami's POV to These Hands, but let me say, I am completely satisfied with the result. I loved it.

well it's very poetic honen, but maybe you could try putting in more conversation between the two of them. The relationship between Zoro and Nami involves a lot of conflict, that's what makes it so pasionate. If U choose to continue U might want to bring that out more on the next Chapter. Good luck.

Sincerely
Tea

I already mentioned my thoughts on this on Green Tangerine, but I figured I may as well give you another review as well. I love this piece. I can't wait to see you crawl into Nami's skin further, and also for you to write intereaction between them.

Looking forward to more!