that was excellent nearly made me cry but it was excellent

interesting ending

good chapter.

As you probably know, I'm not usually a B/E fan, but I read this one anyway because I really enjoy your writing style. You have such a wonderful way with description, I feel like I'm right there in the story. Such a beautiful end as well! Thank you!

good ending! a bit quick for my tastes but still very well done! I am looking forward to more emma-centric fiction from you *hint hint* *nudge nudge*
Iris

Your story was great..the plot kept me glued to the screen..love the way the relationship of Bren and Emma is being explored i hope you plan to finish this because i would love to read how it ends.

interesting chapter. can't wait to read more.

Great chapter. Hope that you update soon.

OMG! You have to keep going! The suspense that you just had to add into this story, is slowly killing me along with Brennan! If you don't update soon, I fear that I may just...

really good i love it. just yesterday i read another story called dominion wars in which jesse was attacked by an unknown person, and he lived but his heart stopped. you should read that story it is great. and yours is awesome i love it thanks for updating, im glad brennan is ok.

good chapter. lots of suspence and wonderment!

LOVE it! Can't wait for the next part so keep up the great work and update soon please.

Don't even think I'll go easy on you because of the "my dear Audrey (...) you give me inspiration".
You just can't stop here! *shakes Aurore* You hear me?
Well, Olivia sure sounds familiar, LOL. And don't hesitate to come ask me for things that can't be found again. Hehe.
But anyway, the point of this review is UPDATE! Your world needs you, Aurore. Desperately. Like now. ROTFL. Sorry, I so couldn't resist. ;)

uh, i got a little confused with the time-frame, but other than that the story was great, as usual. i wonder how long it'll take before they find Emma again. and what happened to Jesse? =)

awesome, awesome story! I cannot wait for you to continue!