 JayManney4Life 2005-04-07 . chapter 1geez, am I the only one who's reviewed this sucker? man, that bites.
anyways, as always bro, good work. it got a bit hard to follow in one or two spots, but other than that, it was a decent lil fic. You're definitely improving, I'll say that much
Love, Peace, & Chicken Grease!
~Jay Manney |