This fic was fabulous. For Seiryuu's sake, NOBODY writes good Suboshi/Yui! It's annoying. But this...this was really touching. Otouto was so lost when I died. It hurts. And so few people portray it really well. But your story was so beautiful. Have you ever considered doing one like this for Amiboshi?

Awww...a sweet and sad first chapter, please write more!

Kawaii....=)

PLEASE! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!

Aw, how sweet...Yui/Suboshi fics always get me worked up. In my opinion, there has never been a better couple created; if they could have only seen past Nakago's deceptions and understood each other...*sigh* beautiful fic, this is going onto my favorite's list

Love it,love it,love it,love it,love it,love it,love________it!!!

That was very sweet and warming up my heart on this rainy day^-^.

o wow that was great beautiful its a great story

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That was *very* intresting... VERY intresting! But it was SO good! Thouching it was, really it was. A SuboshixYui story, damn those that are good are so hard to find! Now before I shut-up THAT was some DAMN good story!!! =^________^=

nice... yup... nice. but i don't think yui wud let darling suboshi kiss her like that. and suboshi only told yui that he loved her when they were off to the byakko no miko's place. and that is only when he kissed yui, and yui got mad at him. oh, what the heck?! i love suboshi! like i told alexa, i like his being not loved by the one he loves. and , oh yeah, suboshi is not used to calling yui yui. he calls her... yui-sama. write more bout them two but please hear my comments, advice, whatever. chow!

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that was so cool I loved it so so much! Poor su-chan.I love my poor twins. so sad.

Thank the 4 gods someone wrote another Yui/Suboshi ficcy! Wai wai! Beautiful!

::sniffle:: this was beautiful! I LOVED IT! (Suboshi cheers in the background) Shun-chan likes it too! Write more like this... or a sequel?

Very sweet. I liked this a lot, it was so insightful. You're a great writer.