OMG! I was going to write a Kurama x Shiori myself when I realized I was not alone! Why did you have to stop? Keep going, please! It's so good. T_T

Hi, I was just wondering if you ever intend to update or if you've decided to put this story on a permenant hiatus.. I'd really appriciate it if you'd let me know thanks :)

Well, you're certainly treating my poor boy badly! Not to mention giving him bad taste. For goodness' sake, I'm practically an old lady!

OK, dropping the weird-Shiori voice...

Was going to say I don't think I'll keep following this, but it also looks lke you'll never finish it either, so that's fine. The writing is better than decent. I actually never would've seen this except I searched for something with M-rating and the main characters Kurama and Shiori, to see if anyone on this site had that warped a mind. Turned out there was just you, and it was just about the least warped a story with this premise could be.

I thought only females had periods of heat. Males' strange minds can be largely blamed on the fact that they are perpetually in heat. Humans' strange minds, come to think of it...

Good & Interesting story. C'mon, bout time for an update, eh?

Damnit, when are ya gonna update!?
I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
This fic is to GOD!
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
Pwease? *Puppy eyes*

Oh My how very interesting this ficlet you wove.

LOL XD That was awesome! I loved it, and also it was pretty funny!
I can't wait until you update!

I luv it and I feel u gurl. When I was writen Family Loven I just felt like everyone was tryin to see or catch me writen dat ** yo. **sed wit my head ondareal. update soon.

Please update soon!

It's not boring at all. I like your story a lot, so... please, please write more! ^^

Definitely enjoying your fic so far... Hiei's little entrance was hilarious! XD

ok where's the 4 th part is good i like just contiue to write .

Nice work so far! I was thinking about doing something similar to this earlier, but I haven't had any luck with setting the story up, so far. I hope you update soon! Kudos on the angsty goodness!^^

I like this story. Update soon.

Update! I need it! Ned it! *Shakes* And...I think Kurama should rape Hiei...but...good story thus far...update!