Gawd that was brilliant.

That was both utterly wrong and totally right at once. You pulled it off because you kept them both so perfectly in character. Would love to read another piece like this, will keep watch for sure.

I LOVED IT! Plz Plz write more. It was so good! :D

WOW. I can't believe how good this was, considering the couple. I would have never thought of it. I hope you write more soon!

Like I said on LJ, pure genius. I never could have imagined a situation like this...well, not imagine one that *works* this well. And I do hope you try your hand at that Herbert/Francesca thing ;)