This is a very well-made oneshot and I agree with all of the other reviews. Considering that I am a huge Mewtwo fan, I would love it if you wrote maybe one more chapter on it.

I agree with the other reviewers 100% This is a fantastic peice: it's short, yet well thought out, and perfectly capable of standing on its' own two feet, so to speak. I would love for this to be expanded, yet at the same time, it's the pure simplicity that makes this fic unique.

Oh, very good! I could see this little scene in my head, for it was so ritch with detail. Nice plot!

Chilling, and very, very bleak...but you don't need me to tell you what your writing is. Reading this and a bit of "Mute", I can already tell that you're a great writer! And me being a Mewtwo fan I wouldn't mind seeing this expanded into a longer story. ^-^

Beautiful and yet sad. Love it.

nice story, especially the fact that the little loves Mewtwo, and sees another side of him, it was sad though when they got seperated.

The little girl was cute.
Poor Mewtwo.
Nice story.

Cute and also sad and slightly frightening.

Overall... very good.

Excellent. Not quite my style, but excellent nonetheless.

-sigh- Now that's sad.

Even though it may be hard to believe, this is both short and well-done. Usually I can't find (or write) a decent short-yet-good story, so this is really something.

Poor Mewtwo. As my favorite Pokemon/fighter in SSBM/pet, I have to say this is very sad; I admire your usage of words and such. Keep up the good work! ^^

Aw! Now that I've gotten my critique out, I feel all sad-like! *huggles Mewtwo* I like the interaction between the characters and such... Aw again. Cute and yet violent. *teary* So sad! And yet exactly like what them scientists would do... -.-;

All in all: great fic! Going directly on my favs! :)

-Kia

*sniff* ;_;

very good!
hope you will make more in this story

This was a really thought-provoking story. Very sad, too. I really liked it. I know this is a one-shot, but I really want to know what happens next. I guess I'll let my imagination do the work.

Wow. Just. Wow. I like this fic. It's sad, but very well-written. Please write more! 10/10!

Continue please! I like Mewtwo!