Please update !
I love this story

Hey Kira

you know you should finish this story how long have you been working on it two three years. and delete that wonder reading of me and this story by the way finish the writting so i can find out what else i need to read out loud.

love ya
manders

ps this story is the bestest story every read review and smile have a great day.

julia/draco !! julia/draco !! YAY ! and i think it would be interesting if the dursleys showed up in hogsmade for some reason or aonther like theyr planning to go on hollyday and they get kiddnapped by a wisard or sumthing and the wisard takes them to hogs made and dudley escapes ... hm that sounds okay for a load of stuff i came up with JUST NOW lol but yea it was just sumthing that came to mind.

i love it so so much!! i can't wait to see what happens next! please update soon!!

Hm...Interesting...I can't wait for more! This is great!

i love your story so much and i can't wait to see what happens next!! please update soon!!

HI!

What do you mean filler chapter!? This was awesome and suspenseful! Symptoms!? You cannot possibly call this merely filler, because it's darn close to being a cliffie for Pete's sake. I cannot wait to find out what is meant by that and to see poor Harry get to see his sister. Isolation must be terrible for both of them, especially being twins and all. Draco is sweet. I wonder if Julia will momentarily wonder if he didn't annoy her awake since until now, he's been rather selfish in canon. I like the new improved Draco in this story. Your writing is coming along so well! Julia is a real HP character to me now and not many other characters gain that status. Please update soon!

i luv it so so much!! please update soon!!

Nope. It's not soap opera-ish that I can tell. I can't wait for more though!

this is good. update soon

Aw! I hope he wakes up soon!

hey i luv this soo kool do u think that maybe she and draco could hook up next chap ? and not another 11 l8r (i donmean to b rude but iv always been an impatient person wen it comes to fanfics) plez continue soon !!

Yay she woke up! I can't wait for more!

Very very good :)

As for the Mary Sue thing, no Julia is NOT a Mary Sue. By the very definition of the made up term Mary Sue, Julia wouldn't suffer from any disease, nor would she be beaten by her uncle or unable to find the words to express what she needs to tell people. If I had to guess, I would suspect that reviewer is 'visiting' from another more snotty site who will remain nameless, because for the most part, people who review at fanfic are not as snobby and picky and apt to label something (albeit incorrectly) There are terms for everything so don't worry about it. A Mary Sue would cure herself, go kill Voldemort and make a fabulous dinner for a hundred guests who showed up unexpectedly at the same time as teaching every class at Hogwarts all by herself. That's what a Mary Sue is.

On with the review! I pushed the button for author alert again for this story so I hope it works next time! Saris is a cool name and I can't wait to find out more! Seeing Draco actully take stock of the fact that someone besides him is in trouble is a big step for the boy and I hope this goes well, because I'm actually into the pairing now way more now than I was earlier on. It's cool to see Snape and Remus talking again and I love that Lupin has a Godaughter as he was robbed of a family. Snape having Draco as a Godson is very cool too and it will be interesting to see this pan out as they fight to protect their charges. Very cool story!!