Reviews for Jack the Action Figure

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Folk 2006-08-09 ch 6,	abuse"“Oh, everything has its time and purpose, young man,” replied the bear. “I watched her grow. I whispered stories and songs in her ear while she slept. I kept evil dreams away. That was why I was created and why I was so loved. I couldn’t be prouder of what she has become. There is no greater privilege for a toy than to have the opportunity to see our child blossom and grow.” The bear put a nearly-formed paw on Jack’s shoulder. “You’ve come into her life at a time when she is deciding what it is that inspires her. You are a pirate?”" These are wonderful observations. This is actually my favorite chapter of all. I loved the bit about the grandmother too. Also..."You should find celebration in knowing that there are many more like you, and that they all provide happiness and pleasure. They stand, as many they stand, for freedom and courage, as you do, Jack.”" Did you know you could write an entire novel about this? "But Jack wasn’t thinking of ways to come to grips with it. He was thinking of ways to grip it. And ways to wield it." So very Jack-like. Hahaha. Poor bear...but very in-character, and I liked the reunion. All in all, I'm looking forward to an update of this story :) Ciao! Ivy :)
Folk 2006-08-09 ch 5,	abuse"“No,” Frigid replied simply. “It’s holy.”" That's intereshting...(heehee) Nice job so far, this is great. :)
Folk 2006-08-09 ch 3,	abuse"“Warh!” he bellowed suddenly at the creature and waved his arms. “Bwarrhh!” The creature looked properly astonished for a moment, and then raised one feathery yellow eyebrow. “Um,” it said." Genius.
Folk 2006-08-09 ch 2,	abuseI'm wondering where the female audience is coming from...the TV maybe? Either way, this is really good. Very interesting premise. :) I like that the dog is the one who communicates with him, too.
Folk 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseNICE. I'm off to the next chapter! Ivy :)
tidelmor 2006-08-07 ch 6,	abuseThis fic is great! Do update soon! ^^
GirlX2 2006-06-29 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis fic inspired me both as a writer and a toy owner. Gleefully unwraps her Jack-tion figure. Wonderful work.
jack sparra 2006-06-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseGOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD THIS IS one of the best Sparrow fics i have read in my life. Congrats!
Pangolin 2006-01-31 ch 6,	abuseI love your story, and I love your writing style! I hope the "more to come" you mentioned at the end of the last chapter is still on its way...
Hermione Vader 2005-12-28 ch 6,	abuseOh, is it over? This is so sweet! I love it! It's better than "Toy Story"!
Meggie Dodge 2005-12-17 ch 6,	abuseI must respectfully submit that you'd better get with it and write the rest of this tale. For one thing, I'd like to see what the other denizens of the Girl's room make of this madman among them. You've got a good range of attitudes going, and plenty of possibilities for coalitions to form and reform as the action develops. Convincing Buzz Lightyear was challenge enough: how you might get Jack Sparrow to stay with the Girl, even at his major disadvantage as to size, will be worth seeing. I may need to know, too, as the weather warms and my own small pirates feel like setting sail.
Redberry Greenleaf 2005-08-27 ch 6,	abuseI love the closet monster!! I can't wait for more!
Carine 2005-07-24 ch 6, anon.	abuseOMG, hahaha i thought i had already reviewed this chapter, then i checked and i hadn't, oh the outrage. Anyways cough, Once again another amasing chapter, i'm very excited to see where this is going, o the suspense. So hopefully you write more soon, and i hope to see some updates for some other stories :) Cheers!
raistlin 2005-07-14 ch 6, anon.	abuseAmawsome man, totally amawesome!! I wonder if this girl has any simpson toys...Homer, you forgot to eat your hot dog!
raistlin 2005-07-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseAnd now the real fun part starts, when the girl ealizes she silps out of reality anf talks to toys...ahh if only.

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