And two years later... I don't think you are going to continue this. It was good. I would like it if you did continue. PLEASE?

As my Jewish grandmother would say, "So, nu?" You going to write any more? :-)

Keep it coming!

you are a very very good writer. I hope you write more to this story.

Lots of grimmness huh? So, who's Joran?

OMG! U made me cry! Keep it comming or I will be forced to...I got nuthin. BUT PLEASE KEEP WRITING! *also clings to John*

i liked how you wrote rodney in the end here. and everyone crying, i could so picture that in slow mo!

just one complaint (okay, not complaint really, more like a request): can you put page breaks in between scenes? like when you switch from john's POV to back on atlantis?? then dumb ol' me won't be so confused. :)

aw, poor them...

MORE SOON!

More! More! I just love the angst!

EKK! JOHN's Alive! But now utterly confused. Sigh, oh well you can't have both. Will he be the same comming back? Will he change? Excellent no matter what haooens cause you kept him alive!

[v]Add author to my Favorite Authors list, pssht. yeah there's a check by that. :)

Continue please!

*clings to Sheppard*

i like. It was very good.

o...I like the soundof this story so far. I iwonder what saved Major Sheppard? An Anceint maybe or perhaps he did it himself some how? Hm...geuss we shall see

MORE! I WANT MORE! How did John survive?? Is Everett dead? What about Aiden and Teyla? MORE!

This is really good. I was so p-o'ed when they falshed the "To be continued" message after Seige. I wanted to cry. I can't wait until this summer!
this is a nice way to tide me over tho!
keep going