 kendrat199 8/2/09 . chapter 1No! My favorite X-MAN dead? I almost perished at the thought. I Scott Summers and I am extremely biased, I love Ororo with Scott. Jean Grey is -breathes- hard to describe. At first, I hated her, now...now, I can comfortably read about her. And Emma Frost is no replacement! That girl is a hot toddy, if I have the liberty to say so. Anyways, this isn't about Ororo or Emma right now, it's about Scott and Jean. For the first time ever, I have felt sympathy for Jean. You authors are incredibly gifted to make me do such.
Bo to Forge!
-kendra 3 |
 Nienna Rose 8/2/09 . chapter 6Just wanted to tell you your format's all messed up for this chapt, doesn't take anything away from the story tho which is very good & well written. |
 adeline liliput83 9/29/04 . chapter 7 wow *silence*
that was good story, and long, too :p
I like how you have everyone as normal people an all, no one as purely mean and stuff. Hope u can continue one day. |
 scififreak 1/4/03 . chapter 7Wonderful, just wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapter. I do have one question, however. Why isn't the Professor's telepathy working down in the other level of the mansion? |
 BarbaraB 12/29/02 . chapter 7Your fic writing is on another level. |
 wahinetoa 5/3/02 . chapter 6-swats you two playfully- would you two cut it out? Ya making us wannabes look mighty shabby, when you come up with oneliners and evocative writing like this was. -smiles- sarah, in all her defensive glory tugged at the heartstrings as sure as did Kitty and wolverines moment in the garden. ororo is always the lass to look for, and her phone call to jean, gently reminded us of Jeanie. Angel and betsy.. -gulping shyly- kassia told me that ebon wrote that part. -wolfwhistles- ebon, ya too wild for this innocent lamb! the most exotic display without being pg13. Bloomin' delicious! more please? will Remy be making a come hither back? pretty please? ? :) |
 ninamonkey 4/21/02 . chapter 6Heya-!
I'm glad you've continued this-I wondered what happened to it.
Don't be a stranger with those updates, hear! This is a good fic, a good
novelesque piece with nice, strong characterizations. Would you believe
that my favorite parts are Jean's musings of Scott? I'd love to see more
of those.
Can't see this as a humor fic, though. This is more drama to me with
brief comedic moments. But I definitely like it.
-"nina." |
 scififreak 4/19/02 . chapter 6This is supposed to be funny? It's not funny but it is really good and engaging. I am totally hooked. THe way you showed everyone's grief was very well done. Please continue. Dont let Ro get back with Forge! Please! LOL |
 Te 7/19/01 . chapter 5 Ebon, hon.. you slay me with such beauty! It was touching, exciting, priceless and funny all in one. I love Stormy, especially with Remy. And this one sure as heck got the hootzpah! ) Everyone in this stunning epic, is fast becoming me fave! -claps- More please. |
 ninamonkey 7/15/01 . chapter 5 Good novel-length fic-I'm eager to read what happens next...but they have electricity, but no water? Lol. I think Colossus should build a resevoir and Storm should fill it with water. Or somethin'! And Scott's drinking...an interesting twist. How did he start? Was he really ever "done" with it? I wonder if Wolverine really did know about it, which caused them to clash. Hmm...
So far, so good. PS-I'm eager for more. |
 SkittleKicks 7/10/01 . chapter 5 Great flow, once again I must say what an amazing writer you are. |
 wyannick54 7/5/01 . chapter 4 I see that i did not have to wait long for the next part. I glad to see that everybody was okay. Another great chapter. |
 wyannick54 7/5/01 . chapter 3 Great Chapter. I like how you are including everybody in the story. I sure to be here to read the next chapter. |
 Gadget 7/3/01 . chapter 3 That was a great chapter. It was so descriptive, which is really good. Keep up the great work! |
 blue 6/9/01 . chapter 2 I like how this story is going. Looking forward to the next part. |