Reviews for While I Breathe

Stealth Dragon 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abuseSwet. Nicely done. Great narrative style. I was hoping someone would do a little something about that aspect of Danny's life. Good job.
jean 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI have to admit, I was a little put out at first by the abrupt style used in this fic. However, it really serves well to convey the feeling of short and choppy pieces of memories flashing through Danny's head. Fantastic. I love some of your created image-words, like 'bone-raw' or 'corpse-eyes'. It's a level of poetry not often found on the internet. Wow. I'm simply blown away. This is wonderful work.
M J Azilem 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abusevery nice your writing is excilent I loved the imagery, tension and feeling.