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clockworkchaos
2009-08-18 . chapter 13
Wow this is one of the best hero/villian reverse AU's I've ever seen.
Gym Libertarian
2009-07-19 . chapter 13
Nice work.
pawnee41@yahoo.com
2009-07-17 . chapter 13
you are good
Thought
2008-12-31 . chapter 12
This story is very well done, and you've managed to take a rather cliche concept and make it original and creative. And man, if Bruce were evil, he'd be damn scarey.
GuesssWho
2008-06-05 . chapter 11
YAY!
Now do more.
PengyChan
2008-01-13 . chapter 10
A really good story - I'm impressed, really. I usually don't like AU that much, still I love this one: you made the characters "switch sides" and act very different than they normally would - still you managed to keep their personalities intact. Amazing job, gotta fave this!
GuesssWho
2008-01-01 . chapter 10
YAY, you updated this!
I love you, man.
PhantomSnape01
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
please write me, i'm begging you
GuesssWho
2007-10-22 . chapter 9
Continue this!
GuesssWho
2007-10-22 . chapter 5
It's weird to see them without their mental problems.
I'm still expecting the Joker's wild laughter, or for Two-Face to call himself 'us' . . .
GuesssWho
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
I like this idea!
Sparkl3star
2007-07-21 . chapter 9
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE write morre
stocktonwood
2007-01-12 . chapter 8
what a great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story, every chapter is more than worth the wait. This chapter had a nice twist in it, one that I wasn't expecting at all. As always, you have a superb writing style. Great job! I look forward to the next update.
VampireNaomi
2007-01-05 . chapter 8
Great chapter. The plot has taken a creepier turn with Crane and his story, and I can hardly wait to see what's going to happen next. I've grown to love the alternate versions of the characters, especially Joker/Napier, and it's a pity this isn't an Elseworlds comic.
trimurti
2006-08-18 . chapter 7
Wow, what an interesting premise! You've written a very engaging story and I've been hooked since the first chapter. I especially like how the former supervillains have changed--their humanity and personality traits are part of the appeal of the story. I also like how this story is told in a straighforward, no-nonsense manner. You know where the story is going to go, and I'm eager to follow it.

Something else that caught my eye is how the Bat-persona has been twisted, yet its primal fear remains the same. It's still everything Bruce Wayne had envisioned when he first donned the mask, and it still provides the fear on this bunch of police officers and metahumans that it did in the regular 'verse. Awesome job with that.

Occasionally, it feels that the story is a bit too blandly-written, but the appeal of the plot itself is enough for me. That's more or less my only criticism.

Thanks for writing such a great story, and I can't wait to see it continue!
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