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Azkaban Angel
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
Lovely.

And she will wait...
Chemistress
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Very well done - these short vignettes and quotes;
and then the last one...*oh dear* - Albus on one level with Ron: "the emotional capacity of a teaspoon" or whatever Hermione called the lack of "soft skills"
Pipsky
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
ah, the angst of Albus' ignorance. I loved it, especially the little quotes from Philosopher's stone which were very cleverly used :)
Katheryn Mae Wilson MD
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Hmm ... you have brought back my ADMM life. It died after my Huddy ship sailed into the sunset a long time ago, and since Sophia Anya Lee and I are in the middle of a coauthored ADMM (and MM/OC) fic, I hoped it would be back! Well, lookie here! It is!

If you want to read our story, it's under the username tabby.hearts.phoenix. :)

Thanks,
Katheryn Mae
lostonbroadway
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
That was very clever and lovely. Near brilliant even. Just fabulous!
minniequill
2007-07-18 . chapter 1
Really good. Suitably heart-wrenching.
Xuimare
2007-02-03 . chapter 1
This was sad for me. I'm not sure if it was meant to be so, but now I feel.. alittle bit depressed.. >_>
ArieSemir
2006-09-04 . chapter 1
Okay, all your ADMM stories are officially on my favorite stories list, and I don't even READ that 'ship. Or at least, not usually. Anyway, more awesome fic. I love how you say so much with these little one-shots. They're very spare and powerful.
Rill of Fantasia
2006-01-21 . chapter 1
I like this. It's very understated. I'm not normally one to mourn Dumbledore's death in HBP (everyone knew it would be him) but this one makes me regret it--now there never will be a chance!
King00Nayr
2005-07-28 . chapter 1
Sad. It really made me feel sorry for McGonagall. Sigh.

I love it that you include the Parkinsons mixed with the Dracos. It is inevitable and I like the idea it is more arranged than true love...ew...Greasy hair...
Jillie Rose
2005-06-13 . chapter 1
Squee.

Have to say I'm a fan of that. And the Grindelwald thing?

Ooh. Plausible. I'm very fond of plausible in Potterverse. That's why the only things I ship are:

Hermione/Ron (oh please, it's Leia and Han all over again)
Snape/Sinistra (blame Gedia Kacela and She's a Star)
Dd/MM (occasionally, anyways).

These are the breaks. Nice fic.
KnightedRogue
2005-05-17 . chapter 1
M, well, m'dear, I'm leaving you a note because I was missing good H/L fanfic - why is there such a drought, lately? - and so I flitted through my favs list and realized I never read this.

Forget that I've never gotten into the Potter fanfic scene, regardless of a rather blatant obsession. :)

Your writing here is fantastic (Here? Just here? Ha-ha). Your versatility amazes me sometimes. The tone of this is so lovely and tinged with darkness and regret. I also enjoyed the POVs you chose to include - Molly and Lucius most especially.

Beautiful work, LL!

*KR*
p
2005-04-22 . chapter 1
amazing peice..wow..again w the last line atually the last lines of each section of the piece...wat did happen at grindelwald? and "Don't talk about things you don't understand"? keep writing and update TNQLL...(please :()
HoldoutTrout
2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Well--it's certainly a very sad story. I can see how it might have turned more angsty than planned. I'm not sure I agree with the general premise, but the characters are consistent in the way you've drawn them--like you've filtered them in a unique way. I would love to read more HP fics if you ever have them in you.
I especially liked the line about the Forbidden Forest. That was pure Dumbledore.
kidarock
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
O o o, More more more, Please? That was such a gripping piece! I just want to know some more! Bexy
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