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| LucyStar7 2007-02-22 ch 1,  | abusethat was nice and by the way Danny was shirtless... |
| Freeing Alys 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, really cute. But I think it would have been a little better if you put in Danny and Aiden's reaction to the speech as she was saying it. But it's still really great nonetheless. I liked it. |
| Pikaia 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, don't take this as a flame. Second, I'm telling you that I'm not that big of a fan of this story, or most of the ones in this series. I like the ideas of them, but you need to work on showcasing them a little. First off, do you have a beta? If not, get one. You need to spread out the story a little more so it's easier to read. Just check it over a few times to make sure it flows, too. -Julia |
| Aaron Hotchner 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI love the story, it's great. I'm a Danny/Aiden Shipper and i loved this, hope you don't mind me adding it to my C2 'The Flirting Corner' (got the title from Alias), if you do mind and want me to remove it let me know and i'll do so straight away, hoping your going to continue. |
| AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was sweet. |