very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up!

change tab to stab on the first line...it's not bad but proof read and maybe a lil longer unless the point is to keep it this length

Rating: 2.5

The good: You attempted to capture Faith's personality in her thoughts and achieved.

The bad: It's far too short, so the capturing of Faith's personality isn't able to be very appreciated. Plus you capitalize a few words in mid-sentence. Not to mention that Faith wouldn't be able to see Buffy's face from all the way down on the truck (let alone be conscious).

Overall: After a few rewrites this could easily be very good. Go back even further in the fight... maybe even before the fight begins. Or at least give some background because I'd be completely lost had I not watched the show.

P.S.: In your review to me you asked me if you had to play to join, and then there was just a blank space. Could you e-mail it to me because apparently can't show it or something like that.

Ah well you have one typo that I can see, but besides that the grammar is fine. The drabble itself... it wasn't bad, but it didn't do what a drabble really should do. We aren't getting any new insight to Faith's character. You need to add more innerthought.