 Gerbils Go Gaga 2009-05-12 . chapter 3 I knew it was Mr. Brightside!! That song is awesome and it fits your story beautifully. Keep writing, I'm sure people like me would be very much thrilled. That is to say that you're one of the very few writers of this genre to inject meaning and emotion to what majority of society thinks is taboo. |
 nomysteries 2008-12-01 . chapter 14 OH MY GOD
This fic totally kicks **!
Absolutely amazing story, and you made it to the song fit it perfectly.
I gotta say your Hermione is the most maddening I've ever seen. So confuse and fearful! I passed emotions from absolut anger (when she slept with Fred I so wanted to slap her face to the ground for hurting Ginny like that -.-) to total bliss (the last 2 chapters) while reading her actions and thoughts haha. But in the end it was worth it. When realization hit her in the Knight Bus I was totally like wohay finally hahaha And we all end up loving Hermione.
Ginny might be a little too understanding but hell, she was in love. I adore her for her strength and perseverance. And Jeez, such patience. Adorable. I want a Ginny of my own ahahah
In the cigarette scene I couldn't help thinking that at that moment she had already learnt how to read Hermione. She didn't sound so desperate anymore. Just... waiting for Herm to come to her senses.
Thank you for writing this, I won't say it's the best I've ever read only cause I don't really like to top 10 my favourite fics, but this is definetly one of them.
You're very talented. Wanna read more stuff from you, and hopefully more Hr/G :)
P.S.: Sorry if it's too long, I didn't really care to go back and review chappie after chappie =p |
 soxx 2008-07-26 . chapter 14wonderful. beautiful writing. one of the greatest fics ive read in a while. |
 lita rocks LbC 2008-06-27 . chapter 8this chapter got me teary eyed. great job =) |
 screamxheart 2008-06-04 . chapter 14AWW!
this story is so amazing.
i really love how you switch from ginny to hermione
and the song goes great with this story. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 14 How very badass!
It's kinda like an iPod. But more sentimental.
I'm glad it all worked out. And this probably my favorite Ginny/Hermione. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 13 She had wanted to feel like the strong one, the one who could live up to all this damage without a mark on her, but it was all there beneath her skin and coming out in front of the boy that had been hurt, too, and it seemed fitting somehow that he would be the one comforting her.
So true.
And I like how it came back full circle like. The fireworks have returned but they go off on a happy event.
I wish I has been brave enough to do this. To kiss mine with fireworks as a backdrop. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 12 NO! Ginny smoking is bad! But i understand. I picked up the habit as a distraction and a slow way to burn.
Man. I wonder what shall happen in the next chapter. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 11 Damn. Fred you **!
I wonder why Ginny wasn't like "OH HEI! I told Fred. Okluvubaibai!" Or something. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 10 Heh. Harry would know.
“I heard Lavender and Parvati talking about it,” he told her, then quickly added, “together - quietly. I just have good ears, and they didn’t say your names outright. But it’s hard to not be obvious when they were using code names like ‘Mind’ and ‘Fire,’ and the tell-all pronoun ‘she.’”
And totally go Hermione. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 9 This line fits the story best. Choking on your alibis. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 8 OH MY GOD!
Hemione's freakout was inspired. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 7 Man. Poor Ginny. I don't think Fred's hurt would last as long as Ginny's. |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-30 . chapter 6 Oh... all the girls share one bigass dorm room. I |
 go_sullivan 2008-01-29 . chapter 5 Damn. Just damn.
But poor Fred. |