I really like this... but regarding your confusion in your Author's Notes... "It’s stated that Gaiden was ten years prior to part one of Naruto, but that’s impossible, seeing as how Yondaime was supposedly ‘killed’ twelve years before part one. I don’t get it. Do you?"

My theory [or attempt to make sense of Kishimoto's madness] is that since the first thing of the Naruto manga we see is the Kyuubi attack that's technically part one and Gaiden is ten years before the Kyuubi attack, not ten years before Naruto is a genin. So then the Third War would have happened, Obito dying and all, then a couple years later the war would've ended and Minato becomes Yondaime, then a couple more years later the Kyuubi attacks. Er, for a total of ten years between Kakashi Gaiden and the Kyuubi attack... in case you were still confused.

Er, keep up the good work.

This is just so incredibly beautiful, enough said.
-Caliko

so sad...it's a beautiful story though.

Beautiful. Made me cry. But then again...I'm not surprised. It's almost inconceivable to me how you manage to create something utterly amazing out of nothing. I wish I could write like you. I wish there were words that express how your writing makes me feel. But there are no words, and if there are, I do not have them.

Thank you.

So sad...

So well-written...

Nice job in envoking emotions with this piece, really. Wonderful.

This fic was incredibly well-written. Write more, hm?

Great introspective into Kakashi's mind.

THAT WAS SAD! WAH! YOU WRITE REALLY WEL! BWAH! *cry cry sob sob* KEEP IT UP!!

I.. really wish I could write like you. Seriously.

almost every each one of your fic is dark and bittersweet but at the same time warm and hopeful. I really like it. I don't know how to express it properly, but I really love it.

I love the way you express imagery and feeling and emotion, because it feels so real which makes is even better.

Absolutely, absolutely well done.

Very very good. Seeing this in the 'angst' category warded me off at first but i went and read it in the end and i can say, the view on life is pretty...i do not know, just that it is very inspiring?

This is a well-written piece of work.

...Wah. Beautiful fic, so sad. ;_; Dude, Kakashi is so cool.

omg just how often do you update? i can't believe i missed this many of your stories already. anyways, yet another in your greek saga, eh? the characterization of yondaime was perfect, i loved it (it really fits w/ the prometheus fic too...i hope you write one of each naruto character, if you can). and although this one did feel less polished than most of your other stuff...(in that...i felt there should have been more meat, more description of memories, in b/t each recurring wave...and esp in the end, it felt a little rushed)...it completely boggles my mind that it's only written in a half hour! a pretty little piece, as expected from someone like you, now onto "softly say goodnight"...omg i wonder how much i missed there...T_T!

I'm so near to tears :(

This is beautiful, and I love seeing new Kakashi fans out there, because I too adore and admire Kakashi for all he stands for.

Not because he is cool, or because he is strong of body, but because he is the essence of a man in his position. Uncertain, unclear, but stumbling blindly in hopes of finding his patch of sunlight.

Thank you very much for this fic.

This one was really neat, short and sad, with a biting little epilogue. The song at the start was perfectly chosen too. The bit where Kakashi is envious of Obito was a perfect touch and his thoughts on what Rin must think of him were heartbreaking. Well done.

oh! as for that long fic I mentioned, school work takes precedence for the next week but in eight days I shall spruce up and send you Chapter 1! Thanks so much for agreeing to look at it for me! :)

i loved this one because life is the most important thing to me.
i think its named icarus because of his fall?
there are also a lot of inconsistencies in the way that ranks are promoted, if you compare the adults and the now-chunins.