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| andaere 2007-10-12 ch 10, | abuseI really liked this story, I love Tom and Judy together. It was a nice, funny, heartwarming story. I especially love this part, it is SO like Doug: 'Tom walked into the Chapel with a huge grin on his face and greeted everyone with an over the top “Good morning!” Penhall and Ioki looked at each other with bewilderment as they made their way over to his desk. “Excuse me, but you are sitting at Tom Hanson’s desk.” Penhall joked. Tom looked up at him with a piercing look. “Oh hey Tom, it’s you! I thought with all the alcohol you consumed last night that you wouldn’t walk into work this chipper.” Penhall commented.' That made me laugh, in a good way. |
| kina 2006-10-22 ch 10, anon. | abusei loved this story it was well written and it did not leave me hanging. keep the stories coming i really love jumpstreet mainly the one with judy and tom together |
| chica 2006-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! very good! |
| NuYawker 2005-12-09 ch 10, | abuseThis was a cute story and very enjoyable. Good job |
| NuYawker 2005-12-07 ch 5, | abuseI hope they find this Parker person and get Judy soon. |
| NuYawker 2005-12-07 ch 2, | abuseLord, what's going to happen to poor Judy on her birthday? |
| NuYawker 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseTom was justified in being upset about being kept a secret. I'm sure the two will work it out though sooner rather than later |
| Yash 2005-08-16 ch 10, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed your story. It was nice blend of romance and action. I can't wait to read the sequel. |
| mjmm 2005-04-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseI love happy endings, I can't wait to read the follow up. Great job |
| daizia 2005-04-23 ch 10, | abuseHey there! Sorry I've been absent for a bit - things have been hectic and overwhelming here the past week+. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I had been following your story when I had a little extra time, and I've really enjoyed it! :) I'm looking forward to reading your follow-up story. I'm sure it will be great! :) |
| purpleant 2005-04-22 ch 10, | abuseThank you so much for writing this great story. I am so happy that Judy and Tom are moving in together and are happy. |
| Ghostwriter 2005-04-22 ch 10, | abuseA follow-up story would be AWESOME! Catch ya on the flip side! |
| mjmm 2005-04-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis story is really coming along nicely. I wonder if Charles is over Judy. |
| mjmm 2005-04-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseI'm suprised no one picked up on the comment Parker made to Hanson. Great chapter. |
| purpleant 2005-04-16 ch 8, | abuseI am so happy that the guys have found Judy, and that she is okay! Thank you |