hey awesome story love it.
PW

This actually reminds me of one of my friends. Except she was never shy. Or at all nerdy. She does have blue hair though.

Your description has improved in this chapter, but you still tend to tell me what happens instead of showing me, keep an eye open for that.

Also I want some more description on "coffee shop guy". All I know is his age and he has an eyebrow ring, and he seems to be majorly hot. Want details.

Good job over all in this chapter. It really is good at times to take time to explore the characters and how they are changing. It helps the characters become more real to the reader.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

~QueenTatooine

Yea for Leesa!I want to streak my hair now too!update please!

good job and keep writing. good for leesa.

oh...I'm guessing we have sighted dwarves! that makes me feel all spiffy inside!=] Update soon!!

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P.S. You are so uberficially cool for updating at all!!

This is a really neat fic. I want to keep reading.

yay she made a friend! haha its easy to make friends when you're desperate, isnt it?

this is a simply fab take on the snow white story.i luv the spin uve done on her!! snow white has always kinda annoyed me b/c of the whole im-a-girl-save-me deal. but this sounds way better! i cannot wait 4 the mirror!! is there magic in this tho? and--will there be more of the hott janitor?

This was a very nice relaxing sort of chapter...I liked it. It makes me uber happy to see that Stells made a friend and that she's nice and all that fun stuff! Update soon!

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Not a bad chapter, It is good to know things are progressing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

~QueenTatooine

bellastellabellastellabellastellabellastella...lol, I said it! Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate!HA!!I'm so proud that Stella whooped Bella in dance class! That line all that and a bag of ships reminds me of VH1...I love that channel

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pretty good chapter. I think the only thing that it needed to be more realistic is for the rest of the class to have had their opportunity to present their homework, sure sometimes it takes too long for all of them to go, but the majority should have had time. All you would have to do is make reference, not describe in detail.

Oh yeah one other thing. I thought Stella was bad at DAnce class, that was why she was nervous when she came in.

~QueenTatooine

lol, ok then...i hope stella wins this competition...whatever it is. lol, anyway good chappie, cya next time :)

ha Bella is perfect, she fits the role she needs to play perfectly! I love the competition between the Stella and Bella. I am glad that Bella wasnt afraid to go against Bella. I loved how Bella also had the class chanting along with her. Sadly, some girls are alot like bella (shakes head). Does Stella become friends with Kevin or leesa or josh? whoa just noticed stella and bella rhyme, was that intentional or by mere accident? But anways, i still love the story so far!