that was really well written

well-done. just one note- near the beginning, you have the word rot, where I think you mean wrought. :)

Great story! I really really loved this one, such thoughts, such unspoken emotions. Very original too!

wow. freakin wow. that is amazing. your writing is gorgeous. wow...

Wow, that was really good! Well done indeed.

Wow... wow... ole crap, wow. You describe everything with a negative look, telling the mood as easily as that. When you write it is easy to show the difference between reality and dreams, or thoughts. Although some parts were confusing, I thought it was wonderful.

*Mati*

Wow, I loved it. That was spectacular. You are truly a gifted person.

-- BlondeArianne ;)

That was absolutely incredible. Breathtaking, really. The agony, the regret, the pain... it was so vivid, my heart broke for Obi-Wan

Aw! *sniff* Poor Obi-Wan! This was very good, I liked it!

-Freetrader

Good! i loved it!

Jade