Wow...that...was amazing. You describe what's happening in such a moving, real way. As the reader you can feel the chara's despair and pain. Wow...
A horrible event to describe but you did very well and it was done very tactfully, good job!

That... Is one of the most disturbing YNM fics that I've read... But I have to say it was pretty good. Its almost told in a lyrical way, was that intended?

Anyway, I hope to read more of your style... A Muraki, maybe? About Saki's abuse and such? ^_^

Poor poor Hisoka... Aw.. it's so sad... You fic is touching... not bad... keep up the work. ;)

interesting piece. Well-written- I like your perspective through Hisoka's eyes.

Woah.. That was .. good. It's scary how wonderful that was. O_o;

You can really feel what Hi-chan was feeling, and the filkee-- it's so real.
I can't describe it. Whoosh.

Great job!