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| Reviews for Very First |
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  Anon 5/2/12 . chapter 1 Oh my god. Kill me now. Kill me now. Kill me before I start tearing up. This is so good. The fluidity, the dialogue, the intro on Rai's part, the bittersweet ending...I loved it all. :) It's a shame you don't write for this fandom anymore. You're really good at it. |
 Spottedwind19 1/1/11 . chapter 1Awww. I don't really get it but it was sweet, |
| California-Italian 3/8/07 . chapter 1 that kinda depressed me |
| Halacanno 7/20/05 . chapter 1 Love truely is such a bittersweet feeling. Kudos on what a great job you did with a first person P.O.V. Bravo. I've read some of your other stories as well, very good work. Keep it up. -Halacanno |
| submergedmemory 7/1/05 . chapter 1 How bittersweet. I feel sorry for Raimundo. |
| LALALA 6/23/05 . chapter 1 NO! THIS IS SO SAD! its good, but kimiko is more like a big sister to Omi |
| Anna 6/15/05 . chapter 1 Ouch! Thats gotta hurt. Poor rai! Make another chapter! I dont like the ending! Jk, love the ending, so bittersweet. But seriously make another chappie! |
| celestial-angel40 6/12/05 . chapter 1 Oh ouch... |
| N7Cmdrharley 5/27/05 . chapter 1 aww the fluffyness ! lol |
| Seductive Venus 5/21/05 . chapter 1 I thought I already dropped a line for it but I think i havent... so gomen nee! I love very first very much! it's so bittersweet. /cries Ate syao, you made me cry! T-T when we look at rai-kun's view, it does hurt because he couldnt say anything to kim-chan. but now.. does this declaration allow some possibility that rai-kun can tell her of his feelings? hm? /smiles it is a nice fic, very bittersweet! keep it up ate syao! |
| KataraAangSokka1417 5/1/05 . chapter 1 UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I COMMAND U 2! OH, and make this a RaiKim fanfic. Omi isn't a good person for Kimiko. Keep that in mind!;)But that's just my opinion!;) Other than that, veddy veddy good 4 your 1st fanfic! Check out my profile! You can see my story there, and u and your story on my fav's! :):):):)Keep writing!:):):):):):):) |
| pishcules 4/19/05 . chapter 1 Oh please dont let this be a one-shot. I really like it, its really cool. Please do another chapter or even another story like it please (kitty-cat and puppy-dog eyes) thanx_ |
| bluhblajbluh 4/19/05 . chapter 1 rubish! rai n kim dnt lke echother so wots da point in mkin up a stry where they do! |
| Sheo Darren 4/6/05 . chapter 1 Your very first Xiaolin Showdown ficcie? Hm... *reads, then looks up from the screen at end of ficcie* I think you did just fine. *checks faded memory for what I know of the show, compares, and nods sagely* Yeah, I'd say you did more than just fine. You did good. Cheers. |
| violetctm 4/1/05 . chapter 1 this is an awesome fanfic... but why cant raimundo & kimiko be together? will u please write one in which they can be together? |
