|Reviews for Very First|
| Anon 5/2/12 . chapter 1
Oh my god.
Kill me now.
Kill me now.
Kill me before I start tearing up.
This is so good. The fluidity, the dialogue, the intro on Rai's part, the bittersweet ending...I loved it all. :) It's a shame you don't write for this fandom anymore.
You're really good at it.
| Spottedwind19 1/1/11 . chapter 1
Awww. I don't really get it but it was sweet,
| California-Italian 3/8/07 . chapter 1
that kinda depressed me
| Halacanno 7/20/05 . chapter 1
Love truely is such a bittersweet feeling. Kudos on what a great job you did with a first person P.O.V. Bravo. I've read some of your other stories as well, very good work.
Keep it up.
| submergedmemory 7/1/05 . chapter 1
How bittersweet. I feel sorry for Raimundo.
| LALALA 6/23/05 . chapter 1
NO! THIS IS SO SAD! its good, but kimiko is more like a big sister to Omi
| Anna 6/15/05 . chapter 1
Ouch! Thats gotta hurt. Poor rai! Make another chapter! I dont like the ending! Jk, love the ending, so bittersweet. But seriously make another chappie!
| celestial-angel40 6/12/05 . chapter 1
| N7Cmdrharley 5/27/05 . chapter 1
aww the fluffyness ! lol
| Seductive Venus 5/21/05 . chapter 1
I thought I already dropped a line for it but I think i havent... so gomen nee!
I love very first very much! it's so bittersweet. /cries Ate syao, you made me cry!
T-T when we look at rai-kun's view, it does hurt because he couldnt say anything to kim-chan. but now.. does this declaration allow some possibility that rai-kun can tell her of his feelings? hm? /smiles it is a nice fic, very bittersweet!
keep it up ate syao!
| KataraAangSokka1417 5/1/05 . chapter 1
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I COMMAND U 2! OH, and make this a RaiKim fanfic. Omi isn't a good person for Kimiko. Keep that in mind!;)But that's just my opinion!;) Other than that, veddy veddy good 4 your 1st fanfic! Check out my profile! You can see my story there, and u and your story on my fav's! :):):):)Keep writing!:):):):):):):)
| pishcules 4/19/05 . chapter 1
Oh please dont let this be a one-shot. I really like it, its really cool. Please do another chapter or even another story like it please (kitty-cat and puppy-dog eyes)
| bluhblajbluh 4/19/05 . chapter 1
rubish! rai n kim dnt lke echother so wots da point in mkin up a stry where they do!
| Sheo Darren 4/6/05 . chapter 1
Your very first Xiaolin Showdown ficcie? Hm...
*reads, then looks up from the screen at end of ficcie*
I think you did just fine.
*checks faded memory for what I know of the show, compares, and nods sagely*
Yeah, I'd say you did more than just fine.
You did good.
| violetctm 4/1/05 . chapter 1
this is an awesome fanfic... but why cant raimundo & kimiko be together? will u please write one in which they can be together?