Chotto...
That was so...Kawaii! ^-^
Totemo yokatta shigoto! I liked it a lot, very romantic and cute. I just recently found out about vampire princess miyu, but i really think this was good and fit very well! Awsome job!I give ya thumbs up! yay! ^-^
...Ja Ne

very nice, your larva personality is very interesting and seems more like him than any other personality i've read. bravo.

Short but absolutely sweet. I adore this fanfiction and the way you portrayed the characters and that bond between them. It was beautifuly done, and put a perfect view on their 'relationship' that so many others try to make it seem as a romantic entanglemant rather than something more along the lines of this. ^^ its so sweet and I just loved it.

I've not seen the ova's or even all of the episodes of the series. However I find the relationship between Larva and Miu interesting. I really like the voice you gave to Larva. Your snapshot makes me want to watch the ova(s).

Very interesting... I liked it a lot!

-Ahria

that is the cutest thing ever! you have got to ccontinue that! omg! omg! it's so cute, so cute. larva and miyu are so cute. how cute! sorry, i'm saying cute too much. ^_^

sweet and beautiful. :)
I truly love your writing.

that's an amazing fic...godly. plz continue

gosh, that's so sweet. That's EXACTLY how he acts around her. He IS her silent protector. The fanfic is so sweet. PLZ WRITE MORE!

Ah! It's so wonderful!! I really like it! So... hm.. well I'm not so sure of a word to describe it, but I really enjoyed reading this work! ^^

awesome story.
I love it!

oh my god ! review was amazing! i totally agree with BlueDragonGril1 that you show write more on

This is a very nice fanfic! I love the descriptions. ^.^

Oh my gosh! I love it! This is such a wonderful fic. Please write more! Please!