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clockworkchaos 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseInteresting and well written
Larie-chan 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseI loved how you tied in the image of steel into "But Haruno women don’t snap. They bend, they twist, they cry and scream and grieve"; what a wonderful mental picture of steel bending a groaning under strain.
Pharos Hyaline 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseOn a positive note, the fic displays excellent writing and was a joy to read. On a negative note, I don't think it fits very well into the real Sakura. She's supposed to be normal and as... well-balanced as one can be when one is a ninja. Being exposed to sickness during your formative years deprives you of that. -S
candycoatedkayla 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseWith such an original plot, I feel this story deserves 10 reviews although I can only give one. But the joy of reading such a wonderful piece of work from you cannot be put into words. Your truly an amazing writer and I will try to sum up my feelings toward this fic. Perfect. ~C.C.K~
The Purple Ghost 2006-08-17 ch 1,	abuseSo touching. Makes me wonder what the women in my family are like.
afitre 2006-04-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is a perfect way to begin a story I have had in mind. I would have never been able to conjure it up, though. I can't even dream a story. I covet your abilities.
Syngamy 2006-03-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, a story that actually makes out Sakura to be strong! That's insane! And VERY well-done. I love it XD
Arashihawk 2006-01-15 ch 1,	abuseNice background story for Sakura. Was it the Fourth that help her mother and uncles to Konoha? This especially works with how Sakura starts acting after Sasuke left.
sillymail 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abuseI like it.
Only Secret 2005-04-28 ch 1,	abuseIt is strange...in the sense that I don't find a lot of story with such an original plot, it's very good none the less! I like how you portrayed inner strength...I've noticed that some authors tend to focus on Sakura's physical strength (I'm not saying that she's weak, coz she's strong hell, yeah!)but I think Sakura's strongest in her emotional/inner strength! Love this story.
deity of death1 2005-04-23 ch 1,	abuseHell, yeah!! ^_^
kouri 2005-04-01 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this story, and I love how you've illustrated Sakura. Too many people downgrade her, but they forget that she's just a normal teenager and overlook how much strife she's had to go through. This piece is definitely going into my favourites. Good job and I hope to see more from you!
Maiyuki 2005-03-30 ch 1,	abuseWow... That's really cool! A nice example of Sakura's strength, and that not all fanfiction have to be based completely on pairings. Love it!!
Sunder the Gold 2005-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI have a strong notion that the blond ninja who picked up Mother Haruna and her brothers was Yondaime, but they should have been about the same age since their kids were. (When ARE they going to come out and say Naruto and the Fourth are related? It's obvious already.) Great fic. I consider it a failing of the anime that Sakura's family isn't introduced. The series has a lot of great characters and a great world to work in, but suffers from being overly Shounen. And from focusing on Sasuke-bastard.
Faery 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a unique piece...I've never read anything like it. Sakura is one of my favorite characters because I believe she has so much potential. I love that you don't make her into a pathetic, weak person.

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