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Great story! The ruler of Tamaran by the way is Galfor, just to let u know!

AW... (I'm sorry I'm a girl, and I MUST 'aw' at endings like these)

Doesn't an Italian restaurant seem a bit out of place for a planet as weird as Tamaran? w/e.

Again, this was another very entertaining chapter! LOL - "stupid seatbelt!" XD God, that was great. Anyways, keep it up, Cat w/ Yarn! I'm dying for the next chapter. (Oh great I'm hooked. Gee, thanks a lot. -_-;)

I love how you nailed all of the character's personalities - everything they did was completely like them! And the way your wrote I could watch it in my head like a real cartoon. Very nice. :D lol, "Show yourself or become a Figorbinorg!" XD Loved that.

Of course, there was the occasional missing comma but nothing big.

-Jay (howdy, nEiGhBor!)

One word: UPDATE!

please update soon. i love this story

kewl! robinand starfire lol

great so far! I can't wait to read the rest!

Wait I forgot to tell u this befo', make Star's speech worse and funnier and make beastboy randomer and say funnier stuff. Fo' shizzle my nizzle bizzle!

Dude! Nice story! Make it a Robstar and a little BBRae. This is better than the other story! Make a little kissing between Rob and star. Plz don't put Titans East in this, not this time. Keep up the good work. Cya tomorow!

nice story so far. how about u make flare fall in love with starfire, and than strfire has to choose between her best friend, and the enemy.

This is really good. Flare rocks.

Good Story. I LOVE the RobStar pairing! There never seems to be enough of those around, don't you think. May you get many more reviews- A.G.R.