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| Sabith 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abusethat was really sad but so well writin i loved it! |
| szhismine 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusewell Fwe, i can now say i've read something of yours. ;) and i can nwo say you are an EXCELLENT SUPERB WRITER! that was so good! my favorite bit: Balymama out of Googooya by Smapta or something or other LMAO! can i put that in my sig? i am now gonna read more of your fics. :D |
| Narc0tiq 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery strong, this, evokes strong emotions (at least it does in me). Fav line? "I never really forgot, because I knew the notes by heart." It's nice and hopeful and a great ending for a sad story. |
| Roz 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAah, poor little munchkin! I just want to mother him in this. Of course I also want to do naughty things with him ... y'know, I'm a very warped ** sapien! Nice fic. Like all the lines, not one in particular, but I like that you seem to have his sarcastic voice down pat. It's one of my main reasons for liking Harper. Keep up the good work! (god that sounds patronising, just ignore me!) |
| Epona3 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseJilliJ directed me here, and I enjoyed reading this! I'm slowly getting initiated to Drom, so it's nice to have a little background (whether it be cannon or not) Very enjoyable. No favorite line particularly, but sweet overall. |
| Jill 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I loved it! It was beautiful, well written, perfectly Harper on spot, and made me cry. Thanks a bunch. |
| Echo24 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseAww! Angst followed by warm fuzzies! A really nice take on Harper and the whistle. :) |
| Stormchilde 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseNot cheesey, I like it very much! Yes I have a favorite, serval I guess: "I was running all around Boston camp trying to annoy the heck out of every Neit I could find. ..." "The works. Anything went. And usually it went too far..." YOU ROCK! |
| Rommie's Voice 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was brillent! I loved it. Thanbks so much for writting it. |
| LittleRedhead 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAw that was sad. I really liked it. I liked the emotion. |
| parisindy 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseo great stuff! |