Reviews for Hold On Tightly, Let Go Lightly

Reviews For: Hold On Tightly, Let Go Lightly

shmibby 2005-07-15 ch 1,	abusewow, wasn't expecting that. Wasn't expecting it do be emma, was expecting craig though. THey both died wow powerful and very well written. two thumbs up
MiniMeMenen 2005-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI think that this story was really good. I loved how it ended. I never expected it to be Emma or for her to kill both of them. I thought it was short, sweet, and to the point.
grumpybear62684 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseWhat the hell?? You have to continue!! I'm dying to know what happens next!!
MoonlitSummerEvening 2005-03-31 ch 1,	abuseWoah! Great story! I, too, thought that it was Sean and Ellie at first, because the darkness of the girl just seemed to fit Ellie. It was a fantastic twister and I hope you write more like it! ~Karin
Furrah's a dinosaur 2005-03-30 ch 1,	abuseWOW!! wow that was really good...i wasnt expecting it to be Emma and Craig...i thought it would be like Ellie and Sean...dunno why. and then when it was like i love you Craig i thought it was Ashley. wow that was cool i love how you incorporated sp the song in it. it was awsome. ill be looking for more keep it up
saraofthedead 2005-03-29 ch 1,	abuseWOW Totally unconventional and unexpected But I liked it
alldressedupnowheretogo 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abuseoh mylanta! that was some twisted sh..(yeah you know the other two letters) very intense. emma and craig, emma shooting craig, reminds me of the whole rick thing. creepy, but excellently written, i hope for more stories like this in the future.
Freeing Alys 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good. I kept wondering who the pairing was the whole way through. I loved how you wrote this, it was really good.
KT the Shimmer Skank 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abuseWell, not revealing the characters until the end made this tricky to read... I understand the appeal of making it a mystery or creating shock-value, but more than anything it was just an annoyance because it's hard to visualize dialogue between two characters who could really be anyone. The twist was cool, but I have to say it could have used some explanation; what brought Craig and Emma together in the first place? What mistakes did Emma make? A few subtle hints would have given the story a more powerful effect. It might have been cool if you'd used Manny, since the effed-upness of Cranny requires no explanation, but the Cremma thing works fine too. Now, with the icky criticism part out of the way, I can say that this kicked alot of **. The dialogue was like Dr. Pepper on my tongue, the descriptive language was pleasing, the incorporation of the song worked perfectly, and the twist ending was juicy-fabulous. Twist endings can sometimes be pathetically stupid, but this one really worked for me. Rock on. Never seen anything from you before but I hope to see more. Cake and kisses.
toe socks 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abusejeez that was tragic... but i loved it. i like tragedy.. happy endings are soo predictable and i don't like them as much unless they are well written and thats like almost never so... yeah, you have a definite talent and made me cry... sorry i'm sensitive. i loved it. here, you are now on my favorite author list.
Read300300 2005-03-27 ch 1,	abuseVery poignant. Very moving. I like it a lot, even if it isn't slash... (Lol, I'm a slasher all the way, so my praises should mean something if a het story kept my attention) I kept wondering who the pairing was while reading it, and in the end, Craig and Emma just fit it so well, especially with the words, "We make our own music." I wasn't expecting the ending, but wow, it was great! I love it!

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