nice, quit sad...slight ooc-ness, and umm muddling of context.

Points go to originality and simplicity of text.

Points go out for muddling of facts i.e...Misao is one chasing after her dreams, Sou is one who deserted them.

Died of a fever, come on...just to get a contrast(with the died of fire) u shouldn't have done that. Srry, ur story.

Misao had more than Soujiro ever did...i'm talking abt friendship and family...but once again ur the author.

Anyway nice work. Srry for being blunt...Bye.

huh? Is it Sou and Mi? _ You Have to wriet more

WHA!

Usually I HATE one-shots, but I'm part of the Sou/Mi fangroup, and I've been reading your story reviews. So I'm on and I see your name, so I read the story.

I am so glad I did.

I am not kidding, you need to continue this. It's so... interesting. Anything could happen! And I'd love to see a Sou/Mi relationship based entirely on their individual souls, and not just a physical attraction.

How is this happen?

you suck

GREAT ONE SHOT!

Quite interesting, I think. I've never actually read something like this, so it's really original. I like how it's written and I love the angst in here... Great job! :)

-Crystal

What a nice one-shot!You rock

Please write more for us!

nice work! The story cld have a little bit more waff in it but i guess it won't turn out the same ne? Anyways, good job again and keep it up! :D

Sou and Mi isn't it? Hope you'll write more!

O.O They're...all...DEAD? SD *faint*

Wow, that was certainly a nice read. Although I got confused at first as to who was talking to who, but it was very nice otherwise!

The grammar looked fine, the characters were somewhat OOC, but not too terribly, it was afterall for the story.

and I've made a ML about Sou/Mi (yahoo group) if you'd like to join (which I hope you will) just visit my profile and there should be a link -

whoaa.. the rating thing has changed. anyways, i liked this alot, it wasnt quite angst, but it was sad in a sweet way. are you continueing?