mh... different. But fitting the character and her melancholy.
I can picture Ami carrying inside of herself this cold, hard edge. Maybe because I've felt it myself o.O;...

Great ending line too. Actually, your writing style is one of the finest I had the pleasure to read (not only in fanfiction, but in general)

i love the way you write Ami and i loved this story...

Wow! I love the new spin on Ami's pesonality. A great rewrite. The ending is amazing, the last was perfect. I loved it, just loved it.

Beautiful, simply beautiful.