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| Megara15 2008-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseKind of cheesy... |
| Harmonic Friction 2007-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseYou can't imagine how much I chortled during this. "You gotta place!? I didn't know that! Ahahaha!"(amazing.) |
| a girl 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abusegreat story... write more please ! |
| tear of the sun girl 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseVery good fic so far. I love this couple. Write more please. |
| ICRepresentative 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Very sweet! I can still see Mirage being loyal to Syndrome, even after what happened... I like this. A lot. Keep up the good work! |
| Darkness Shadow of Hatred 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abusethis is such a good story...mirage/syndrome are so cute together...you should write more...it really good..keep up the good work... |
| Lady Ashari 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseLots of potential in this, please keep going. I actually feel sorry for Buddy, even tho I hate him in the movie. |
| Freddy K 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseNot usre about the pairing...? HUn, what's not to be sure about, he was this close to kissing her in the movie. You know...lips puckered, face close. That sorta thing would usually hint at a relationship of some sort. Heh...yeah Nice...sad as hell. I'm still not over his death to tell you the truth. You know I LOVE how I always seem to get attached to the one character that inevitably dies at the end. Don't you love that? *sigh* I'm glad we share similar concepts about him. |
| Gremblin 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much for posting this!! I had just told my little sister that they didn't act like the typical worker/boss couple. That they seemed too close for that. I'm so glad that someone else noticed that! and very funny stuff, having Syndrome seem drunk. I was trying not to laugh at it out loud(as I'm in class). |
| Fairly Odd New Yorker 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I loved this. You're a great writer :-) |
| mirage 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw. she still loves him!...poor budy. Realy goddare you going to continue? |
| EclipseKlutz 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, understandable--I get where all this is coming from. Not exactly a fan of the couple, but this is an amazing piece of work. The words flow, the characters are themselves and dynamic all the same... All in all, I loved it. Also, I agree--it seems much too easy that she'd work for him because of that. |
| Rose Oniel 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abusei love it! write more. i also love the mirage surry thing it is so cute. |
| Impressed 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust thought I'd let you know...I LOVED this. In character, well written, and just a plain ol' good read. I really, really hope you continue, it would be a shame to see it end here. |
| Vaude 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was a shameless piece of fluffy, WAFFy story. But, damn, did I love it. Buddy and Mirage where made for eachother, hands down. On a more critical note, I'm not sure if it's possible for Buddy to have lived through that whole ordeal, but who the hell cares. |