|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| marajade963 2007-02-01 ch 9, | abuseGreat as always. So pleased to find this waiting for me after my last stint of night duty. Love your take on the rain. And when I think about it I believe you're right. Rain is clensing. Not sure I think of it as an ill omen. I rather like it. Add a bit of wind to it and you've got me captivated. |
| Mandy I Am 2007-01-30 ch 9, | abuseOhh nice update!! I've been waiting for this one hehe. I'm beginning to think Mr. Noojie Woojie has some sort of feelings for Rikku that he doesn't want to admit to himself. I like how you have the feeling of the story written. It's intriquing, interesting and keeps me wanting more. |
| Parron 2006-10-04 ch 8, | abuseLookit, see, I remembered to log in this time around. Amazing. >> Me again, your cheerful rambler, out to strike. I'm interested in the - can't even well word it - the Rikku Nooj relationship you're spelling out for us. Platonic or not, either way I'm interested in seeing how it'll turn out. This is a rare story where I don't think I have any real "preferences" for pairings, I'd be as happy with G/R as N/R as, oh, Leblanc/Rikku, I think. Which is awesome. (The pairing thing, not the LB/R, although that would be awesome in a different way.) Nooj's thoughts are interesting and - this is just me, sticking my foot in my mouth - it's sort of a nice change from the "heavier" writing of most Nooj fans (let's hope they don't kill me now). Not to say you don't take him seriously, I think, it's just easier for me to like him. XD; And I love the idea of the official Death Seekers Club, Mushroom Rock Sector. With jaunty red berets, you think? ;) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, whenever that may be. Hope you kick the illness away and stay healthy! Parron |
| marajade963 2006-10-03 ch 8, | abusesorry to hear that you've been unwell. Hopefuly you are now fully recovered or well on your way to recovery. As for this chapter. Its very good although short. Love figuring out what's wondering round Nooj's mind, and you've done it so well. |
| xbattlegroundx 2006-10-03 ch 8, | abuseok thank you 4 updating. Now could you do it again plz? |
2006-09-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseOkay. Ohkay. Fine. You win. I admit it! I like this story. I really, really like this story. I read this story two times through in a row. I just don't get it! I'll be frank. First time I clicked this? Boring, I thought. I skimmed. I skimmed the first few chapters. And then--I don't know what it was. I got hooked. The style is so bare. Almost too bare. But the dialogue is so spot on, the characters so perfect - I love the fact that you narrate through Nooj, and that I can still /feel/ what the other two think. And that's the part that gets me, I think. There are a lot of stories around here, but hardly any of them make my stomach twist when I read them, make me feel for the characters, not in theory but in /practice/. A lot of the time, it's like, "I know I should feel this here," but you don't, right? But with this story, despite the bare-bones format - there's not that problem. And that is /so awesome/. You also deserve major kudos for using an overused, terrible cliched plot, and making it work and work realistically and with a different perspective. Yes! No sobbing in corners! No flowery prose! It's refreshing, and keeps me from running away screaming. You also deserve points for your dialogue: They all, Nooj especially, have such distinct voices, and it all rolls off so well. Please, please update this soon? I need a new chapter. This story is my drug. ;) If you excuse me, I'm going to re-read it... again. ~ Parron |
| xbattlegroundx 2006-09-26 ch 7, | abuseYou have captured Nooj perfectly! well done! -clap clap- PWEZ WRITE MORE! PLZ! (looks at author with puppy dog eyes) Wot happened to Baralai? I thought they were good mates. And wot bout LeBlanc? |
| xbattlegroundx 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abusenice job in chappie 1, Its like you have the real Nooj in there. |
| Mandyb78 2006-09-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseYAY! Thank you for updating this.. I was looking for the story for awhile but couldn't remember the name of it. Good thing I reconized the summary when looking at the updated stories. *dances* Heh.. it would be funny if Nooj fell for Rikku. Great chapter and I look forward to more updates! I'm going to have to favorite this before I forget to. |
| Mandy 2006-07-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like this story. You are a good writer. Please update soon! |
| Angel Taisha 2006-04-07 ch 6, | abuseThis was the perfect length, Tagg! You gave out just enough and leave me wanting more! It was well worth the wait on this, really. I can't wait to see how Lucil does with Rikku. I still love the Firewine. What a great name for a Spiran alcoholic beverage! I love this story; it's one of my favorites of yours. |
| Jezzi 2006-04-04 ch 6, | abuseOoh, update soon! I really want to know what's going on in that bedroom. And I hope she doesn't kill him. Eek. But Lucil... smart woman, that one. |
| marajade963 2006-04-03 ch 6, | abuseDont know why I didn't notice that you'd updated this earler! Ahh well, I've read the new chapter now. bit short, but got to the meat of the matter. would like to see more please!! I do love the way Nooj is willing to help Rikku. |
| Tee Vee 2006-04-01 ch 5, | abuseWow! I'm really getting into this for some...odd reason... I love Nooj's character. Ha! If you can't tell that is a genuine compliment given the fact that I don't usually favor the deathseeker. Where have you gone? Update for all your eager fans. Oh, and don't be too ** Rikku now, eh? Heheh. Alrighty. Smile! :) |
| marajade963 2006-03-22 ch 5, | abuseA sad story so far, but this chapter made me smile. I'm thinking there is hope for Rikku, which makes me happy. You've a good story here, thanks for sharing it with us. |