Great story. Loved it. :)

I loved the plot, tis always a good topic for one-shots. I hope to see more from you, you're a very very promissing writer. My only suggestions are to be careful with grammar and spelling ((I have much trouble with that myself)) and to try to keep the mood consistant. I definately support the loyalty Star showed to Robin, but it took away from the gravity of what she was doing. She was giving up her reputation and somewhat failing her planet all because she loved a boy. Obviously, there would be some distress in that idea. So, it might have worked better if you kept her mood a bit more solemn in the end, rather than becoming overjoyed at the prospect of staying home. Just try to keep it a little balanced, is all. Either way, wonderful piece of work. I applaud you.

AWW! tht rocked! nice one shot! ull probably c me again while im readin ur other stories. l8r

CUTE, SHORT, BUT NUN THE LESS GOOD!

Singed,
Odd's Wife

aww such a cute story! anyways good job!

AW! it was REALLY cute! all i hafta say is u shud edit a bit more n all...but it was still AWESOME!