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frostbite n apples
2007-10-22 . chapter 4
I think you spelled her name wrong. I think it's spelled "Hatshepsut."
LynLin
2007-06-13 . chapter 12
Wow I really like these drabbles. Maybe I'll go look at your livejournal. Anyway, all I have to say is: wow. You really have a way with words.

-Lyn
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 12
Good job. I do feel sorry for Ryou so much sorrow in his life.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 11
Good chapter. RYou is finding out a lot about himself.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 10
Great!
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 9
Poor Ryou, Bakura is protecting him as best he can. Good chapter.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 8
Good chapter.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 7
Poor Ryou. Good chapter.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 6
This is so sweet and angsty.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 5
Great! I love this so far.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 4
Great!
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 3
Good chapter.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 2
Good chapter. They are enjoying each other.
dragonlady222
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Good chapter.
Cody Thomas
2007-01-21 . chapter 12
Ryou just sounds so resigned to his fate...I love angst, maybe a bit too much...NAH there's no such thing! Great job!
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