Interesting write. I knew this is one of those that would really get some reading, and one can tell this has a Larry Niven influence. If you really worked with your writing and not wrote so much fanfic - you might be taken seriously as a writer.

Good story. I liked the ending.

Wow! I love the Outer Limits and when reading your story I believed I was actually reading one of the episodes. Very nice! You did a good job with the plot and the little moral things they always stick in. You are a talented writer, keep it up!

That was a great story, it was a fairly original idea and you can really get a picture of whats hapopening. You can tell when you're reading a quality story when you can view it like a movie, not like reading shakespeare (not that there's anything wrong with it). I give the story a 9/10 overall. The ending statement thing in caps was well thought too. I'll look around for you're other works. I'm surprised I'm only you're second review on this. You have talent.

Very well done, I enjoyed your imaginative story very much