|Reviews for Memory prime REVISION 2|
| Nickolaus Pacione 3/21/04 . chapter 1
Interesting write. I knew this is one of those that would really get some reading, and one can tell this has a Larry Niven influence. If you really worked with your writing and not wrote so much fanfic - you might be taken seriously as a writer.
| Saturn Rising 10/19/03 . chapter 1
Good story. I liked the ending.
| Deranged Llama 3/27/02 . chapter 1
Wow! I love the Outer Limits and when reading your story I believed I was actually reading one of the episodes. Very nice! You did a good job with the plot and the little moral things they always stick in. You are a talented writer, keep it up!
| Vegeta2076 2/2/02 . chapter 1
That was a great story, it was a fairly original idea and you can really get a picture of whats hapopening. You can tell when you're reading a quality story when you can view it like a movie, not like reading shakespeare (not that there's anything wrong with it). I give the story a 9/10 overall. The ending statement thing in caps was well thought too. I'll look around for you're other works. I'm surprised I'm only you're second review on this. You have talent.
| Brian 9/21/01 . chapter 1
Very well done, I enjoyed your imaginative story very much