its realli realii gud but i think u need to lenghten the chapters and not rush so much sorry im not being mean:D
plz update soon!

please write more your story is really great so please write more!

so you are cont this story at all? i am sad now. oh well. i understand.

Thank you so much for writing so much already. This story is really good and hopefully you'll leave the war soon. Get home safely and update soon! Thanks again!

i love it

Thanks for writing this story, and good luck! May lots of good thing come your way...

-Iris.D

Oh my god...I'm sorry about all that and thank god your alive! I'm sorry that your fiance is not anymore however. I perfectly understand, good luck!

Aw...I were looking forward for a new chapter...! Well...Good luck,keep writing and update as soon as possible!

i would give it an 8. i would also love it if you would update sooner than every 2 years.

2 - really it's only because of their personalities and Temari and Naruto being together! They seem too darn mature for their own good!

10

this is really good so far! please update soon!

you should continue with the story. i LOVE the story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon! byebye:)

i give the story a 7 and wander why you havent updated in so long.

Wow!! This one deserves 10!!I love it!!Keep writing and update as soon as possible!!