I loved this chpter.

Nice!

Wow! you're a guy and you like CCS, not something I see everyday. And such a good story. And not the excessive specific deatail that bore me to death, just right. This is one of the few...maybe the only one...that i like that is Melin and Touya. Usually i'm a SXS. I read all of the chaps before i responded. so...don't you think you made Sakura's character just a little too mean or...rude? I don't think you really captured her character very well. also, it was somewhat hard for me to realize that touya and melin were together by ch4, well that's when i realized it. Your transition (is that how i should put it?) wasn't very good, or you purposely want to make your readers do some inferring. Anyway, it is a good story with LONG CHAPTERS (a good thing)! Hope you get your rhythm back soon! UPDATE!

A good entry into the story as usual. Though I'll have to reread the story since I read Fallen Neo more often. Anyways, great work and hopefully I'll be more familiar again next chapter.

From everyone she could have run to she chose him. So cute.

So what will be happening next?

It's the first time I've realized this story is Meilin and Toya...stupid me.

I love the story so far, and I don't mind if it's a whim. I think you've really gotten me into this pairing. It's quite amazing.

Your writing so far in this story, like Fallen Neo, is fluid and quite excellent. If anything, I have to admit that you could put a bit more of Toya's problems in it.

Other than that, keep up the great work.

Aw...how sweet...hurry up n update! I can't wait 2 read ur nx chapter!

really great so far..im gald you updated! D cant wait till your next one!

nice!

I've done it again, fallen in love with a dead end story...the pain of the never ending suspense...your story was fantastic, I was hanging on to every word. I loved how you made it so that we're wondering right along with Touya what the hell happened to Meilin, it worked beautifuly with your realistic writing style. So my plea is this, reconsider your decision to not update this story, it's too good to go to waste. John Mayer is waiting...

I don't know how I feel about Meilin being all beaten and broken. I understand that she's been through so much but it's still taking me a while to adjust. She was always the most firey character of the anime and I'm a little sad to see that trait go.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice chapter. Wow! You haven't updated this in the longest time! I'm glad you did! ]

I really like how you portray Touya in this fic. And Meiling and Touya really do make a wonderful couple. ]

You're having writer's block on Fallen Neo? Hope it goes away.

Keep up the great work!

cool story so far. i usually dont like reading M&T stories either. this one has struck my interest. good job. why is meilin so bruised up? also, when will sakura find out that it is meilin who is in her house? i cant wait to see the next chapter. good luck. please update soon. thanks...laterz.

oH awesome sorry.. it's kinda confusing.

Dear Ciuline Ihmenjo,

Why do have such pretty, pretty descriptions?

I thought I was reading a noir story at first XD.

Sorry I took so long to review! I am still working up courage to read your monster fic FN, because I am deathly afraid of angst and SS. However, I will be keeping tabs on this one *points*.

Sincerely,

Sasori