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Reviews For: Fallen Angel Part I - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

Jamieson Z
2005-05-27
ch 17,
abuseAh! You didn't! But...ah! I love the fact that there was multiple updates for me to come back to, but I'm really sad with Chapter 16! (although congrats, it was done well). And what's this about leaving the Drom Authordom?! What about Part Two?! I'm all confuzzled! Great job, but I really hope that's not it, I hope to see a continuation *eventually*. Please?! :->
Iara
2005-05-27
ch 17,
abuseThat was just incredible! I think this has to be one of the best fanfic series I've read.

You're leaving? Have fun with Star Wars. I'll miss you! *hugs*
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 17,
abuseWah! Now I'm really sad. Please, please say that this really isn't the end of it all! I did three impossible things before breakfast this morning, and this is my reward?

I've loved your stories in the Andromedaverse. Happily, I like Star Wars, so I'll have to follow you over to that fandom...so, you're stuck with me, chickie! :)

Keep up the great work on your writing. It's awesome!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 16,
abuseYou made me cry. Happy now?
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 14,
abuseThis is an awesome line! "My superior good looks and charm?" LOL!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 13,
abusePoor, shell-shocked Nuria. You do the understated angst very well.
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 12,
abuseOh, I feel some drama coming on!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 11,
abuseAs nifty a literary device as the mini-chapters were, I'm happy to have the longer ones back. They're always packed full of great dialogue and action. Very nicely done!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 10,
abuseCloaking is too cool!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 9,
abuseFlux capacitor? :) That brought up a nice flashback to the Back to the Future trilogy.

I LOVE Harper's wacky projects.
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 8,
abuseYou better believe Telemachus would stay with Beka! Great update!
L. C. Brotherton
2005-05-26
ch 7,
abuseI'll miss Terla. She was unique and you did a great job of making her a believable character.

This was a very dramatic end for her. Well done!
Vee017
2005-05-26
ch 17,
abuseYou're leaving Andromeda!? We're losing you?! *sniffle* Authors tend to shift fandoms every onece in a while, I've done it my self. Maybe you'll be back someday?
And Part 2 is coming right? I have no idea what or how this series will end, I'm done guessing and will just enjoy what's left of the ride.
Thanks for the stories!
Vee017
2005-05-26
ch 16,
abuse*cries and grumbles* Trance had better reset this universe. Everyone's going to die, they're doomed. Chaos and the Apocalypse.
*sniffle* He never told her he loved her! She better not be really dead. Is she!? No!
Why? Why oh why oh why...is there still some miracle coming? Should I even hope for anything?
;_;
Vee017
2005-05-26
ch 15,
abuseRommie with Boa's voice, wonder how he worked that. The entire system huh? Bye-bye Worldship. The death of...Beka's name is the next chapter's title...it better not be her or T.Rhade! :(
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