Did... Did you just make Luke join Vader? Wait... Oh Are you letting Luke go with Vader in Luke's hopes of saving his father from the dark side?

I'm kinda torn on what to say- I like what you wrote but it settles wrongly in my head.

This is great! Had my pulse racing.
You've covered this moment before, in the order I've read your stuff. It's also a favourite Trilogy moment of mine; so convulsive with possibilities.
Keep on writing.

Where Luke is slipping and about to fall over the edge, and Vadar says, "Give me your hand." and Luke thinks -I already did-. Wonderful. :)

Good.

i'm guessing Luke died at the end of this, but i'm not sure. it was nicly writtin tho. you really portrayed luke well. kinda panicy. it made my heart race, that's for sure! but . . . did he die or did he pass out aboard Vader's ship as he joined the dark side . . . ?

Beutifully written, great job. But are you realy going to just end it here? There's so much potential in this story! Please continue!

Interesting. But, wouldn't the Force have saved Luke anyway?

Okay! Beautiful yet again. You do the internal struggle in Luke so well and the seduction of the dark lord is wonderful. Once again I want to know what happens next!

(whimpers) No... Luke... don't do this, don't give in to him... Lyn!! What will happen to him next! Please, don't leave us hanging (literally) with such a cliffhanger! You know, I always wondered why Vader didn't use the Force to keep Luke from escaping him on Bespin ;P But then, I guess it's for the same reason that he never used the Force to get rid fo the buzz droids on Ben's ship in ROTS ;P

Keep up the great job, my friend!
Love
Mireille X

Another great one

Great fic, Loved it very much! I had read it before but it was a second read more than worth. A sequel would be cool indeed!

I liked this fic quite a lot, more that The Lamb (perhaps because you wrote that one so long ago and you've improved since then?". I think you need a beta to proof, as some of your sentances run on but all in all this was the best AU Vadar/Luke I've seen so far.

this is grate. but what do you mean end? i bet there is more in your head, please share it with us