please update this is realy good.

Wow... What an amazingly well-crafted story. I'm loving every moment of it. You managed to fit everything together so well. The writing style's not perfect, but it's straightfoward and clear. And I feel that clarity is something that a lot of writers just don't have and you're really showing your skills.

Can't wait for more!
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OH I CAN TELL THIS IS GOING TO BE AWSOME STORY! HOPE YEW CAN GET OVER W/E DIFICLTY IS GOING ON!IF THERE'S ANY THAT IS! UPDATE SOON!!

This story rocks!I must put this story in my Favourite story file!

dude that chapter was so total great i loved it so very much, and i love how kari was being beaten up much but that mine just be my kari hateingness just showing though, well i cant wait for the next chapter hope you update soon

Digital Universe? Ah, alternate worlds. Classic cop-out. Nothing wrong with it, I'm just surprised I didn't catch on earlier.
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I have decided not to comment on giving Mimi Psychic powers and Takuya suddenly having a fit of the evils. I'm just taking it for granted that you promise to elaborate in the future or be torn asunder by my Snorlax legions.
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Did I mention I dislike Duskmon as a form for Kouichi? I seriously can't see him using that form of his own will.
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You use card power for one thing and not for another. At least come up with excuses for the variance! Wargreymon maxes at 700ish. Fine. It's just that Kaisergreymon and Magna Garurumon break 900 attack, and a measly Vritamon hits 700 easy. Like I said, they don't make spirits like they do now. In other words until you come up with good excuses I'm going to be laughing at your inadequacy.
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I'm interested in the idea of Hikari and Sora going on a crusade. It's just that I'm bothered by everything from possible exit scenarios all the way to eratic power levels. Please think up excuses and call back.

Nefertimon. Interesting choice. You chose an evil side and a supposedly good side, proving that Hikari can probably be changed. Mm.

Death to Sora. >_>

I like how you hint, even if it's unintentional, Koumi. I seriously adore this pairing to pieces, and...Uh.

Oh well

Yeah Takuya finally evoled! See you soon.

Alright, you asked for it.
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Firstly Salamander Break is the fire tornado to explosive kick. Burning Salamander is the Fireballs.
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Fuugamon? I can't see that being a likely form for Sora. Do you have something against her? And are you really going to limit yourself to only candidates for Garudamon?
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Why Duskmon? Duskmon was a corrupt form Kouichi used when he was being pulled around by a deranged angel. Moreover using that form also prevents you from using Reichmon which makes me sad.
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Why was Takuya able to evolve so easily? He couldn't to save Chakmon and Tomoki could evolve by considering a problem that didn't even exist yet. I also didn't appreciate how useless he was in the battle, Tomoki killed Asuramon the fire type and his Cochi-cochi cotton was cold enough to freeze a flame solid in episode 3.
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10 Spirits gets you War Greymon? They don't make spirits like they do now. Perhaps I'm new-fashioned but War Greymon isn't of the same calibur as Kaiser Greymon or Magna Garurumon. You also seem to have slightly different level feeling from me, I always put H-Hybrids above Adult level(Ceruberumon), B-Hybrids above Complete (Karatenmon), and A-Hybrids above Final(Black Seraphimon), with the appropriate excuses. Note that Fairymon and Chakmon are treated as weaker. That's one of my beefs with Frontier. You have H and B-forms being adults and A-forms being Complete, that doesn't fit.
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I'm going to guess there's going to be a major relocation or some sort of mass hypnosis/time reset at the end of this for the Chosen. They can't go back to a normal life and those are the most likely options.
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Timeline Error! Is the world Black Wargreymon terrorized the same as Frontiers digital world? If it is why didn't the three angels get together and thrash him? They've been ruling since the sealing of Lucemon after all.
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I'm certain I've forgotten some beefs but I can't remember them at the moment. See you next chapter.

You have namings confused. Geist Abend is Duskmon's eye lasers and Eroberung is his sword attack.

I just finished chapter three. truely suberb. An excellent story. Don't know how i feel about the villians (remembers chapter two). but its definitely unique.

dude this chapter so total rocked i total loved it am glad takuya finally found out how to digivolve

MIMI. Oh gosh, you just HAD to bring back my favorite Season one character. BBalhah. She and Koushiro are so incredibly awesome. lovelovelovelovelovelove.

D'Arcmon is supposedly Hikari. So, um, she can also Slide Evolve to HippoGryphmon? And then, um, Murmuxmon? o_O If you're going by the 7th movie, at least.

Nice story. I liked it a lot. The only thing I didn’t like is the spelling mistakes (‘his’ instead of ‘her’ and such).
Seems like Mimi, Izzy, and two more of the original chosen (I’m not going to name them because I’m probably wrong) are still alive and are not evil. That still leaves a few more with unknown fate. It would be interesting to see what happened to them.
Anyway, the story is good and I hope it will be updated soon. I can barely wait.

Encore! It's good to see that not all of the Adventure Chosen are 'evil'... Yay!